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Written for The Haiku Challenge 2012 - Day 3 – February 3rd  – Theme: Paint the Image
Photo Clicked by Anand of: Apple Blossom's Photography



Shivering hands with
impecunious stick scream
seeks gentility
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  1. fantasy in practicalityFebruary 3, 2012 at 12:17 PM

    the whole combination of words spark:)

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  2. becca givensFebruary 3, 2012 at 12:57 PM

    WELL DONE creating a powerful word imagery!!!

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  3. JANUFebruary 3, 2012 at 1:16 PM

    Lovely again..

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  4. Fida BosuFebruary 3, 2012 at 4:57 PM

    Love it!!

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  5. br!nDleFebruary 3, 2012 at 9:40 PM

    awesome...:)

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  6. KarenFebruary 3, 2012 at 10:34 PM

    Strong imagery in your words!

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  7. Maxwell Mead Williams Robinson BarryFebruary 3, 2012 at 11:25 PM

    one sentence haiku, well expressed.

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  8. Someone is SpecialFebruary 4, 2012 at 2:50 AM

    yes little one the hands seeks.. let God be with her.. PS: The badge in the sidebar is too big update it with the new code :-)

    Someone is Special

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  9. GraceFebruary 4, 2012 at 4:13 AM

    I like that shivering hands image ~

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  10. Andy SewinaFebruary 4, 2012 at 4:33 AM

    Amazing the way you word painted the middle line!

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  11. TamekaFebruary 4, 2012 at 5:15 AM

    You're quite good at creating haiku! Powerful!

    http://lyricfire.typepad.com/lyric-fire/2012/02/lyric-fire-lace-fronts-and-hymn-books-a-poem-about-self-anointed-truth-talkers.html

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  12. SimranFebruary 4, 2012 at 8:18 PM

    fantasy in practicality,
    And right now my eyes are sparking bright with happiness.. :)
    Thank you,Sanchi!

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  13. Jyoti MishraMarch 5, 2012 at 7:46 PM

    clear expressions..
    its not easy to convey such message in few words.. !!

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