Monday, June 13, 2011

IN THIS BEAUTIFUL RAIN



In this beautiful rain my heart wants to forget it's pain and to let enter the shimmering pearls into my vein,
Closing my eyes with an open heart and open arms I'm welcoming this beautiful rain to grasp it tightly within...
In an optimism that it will ameliorate my sored heart and shattered dreams;
Oh rain , I wish you come again and again; You pleases to my soul and makes me realize my fowl, 
Though the drizzle makes vociferous sound but it assures me that you are coming to the ground!
The hue of rainbow makes me feel the delight ; enlighten my hopes and the way of destiny's bright.
In this beautiful rain my heart wants to forget it's pain and to let enter the shimmering pearls into my vein.
Wet soil's fragrance enhancing my sensation more eternally ; I want to dance in this graceful rain and won't break this amicable chain,
You are the one who heal up my pain;
You are the one who pleases to my vein,
Come rain again and again and heal up my broken heart and strain.
Sharing with Short Story Slam Week 16

27 comments:

  1. Nice one.....You writing force me to recall my collage days.....When in rain we friends wonder here and ther on bike and shouting on road and then Hot hot tea in rain what amazing days at the time.....

    Wonderful post.....

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  2. Rains indeed are one of the most beautiful gifts we have from God... And just like the rains, your poem is so refreshing and delightful too :) wonderful Simran :)

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  3. Simmi.. Yes! you are very right.. rains freshens us in & out.. Lovely words dear..
    Altering the song which u like from the Movie- "Swades"
    'Saavanya Saavanya..mein toh hui baanvariya..Baarish ne mann moh liya.. Saavanya ho..:):)

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  4. I liked your poem , you have expressed your feeling through this poem ..and wat a rhyming ..:) lovely !! wow!!

    listen and watch it , I am sending u utube link...lovely rain song ^_^ http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lW-1Ytwn4a4

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  5. Beautiful poetic expression....

    and who doesnt love rains??
    be it of any age group or of any section of society...and so do i...:))

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  6. Awesome.. :)


    Touched my heart although i didnt read it.. :P

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  7. the feel of gettin soaked in rain...feelin the bliss of the cold drops lashin ur skin n wind caressin...ooo feels so fresh n amazin...lovely write...:)

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  8. hmm AMEN to that and may that happen soon .. broken hearts get mended soon and the ones who broke them well may they .....

    ah well god bless them tooo

    Bikram's

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  9. It's so beautiful........really when the rain starts.....all of us have same feelings......."Oh rain , I wish you come again and again; You pleases to my soul and makes me realize my fowl"

    Loved it!

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  10. I look forward to your blog like I look forward to a summer rain. Really wonderfully written!!!


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  11. Rains bring back pleasant memories and yes, the sound of the rain hitting the ground reassures that reality is somewhere close.

    Nice read Simran :)

    Cheers,
    Blasphemous Aesthete

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  12. mind blowing.
    love the rain image,
    keep writing.

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  13. Beautiful image and wonderful poem there's a sense of rebirth and renewal in your words that's simply divine

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  14. Rains indeed soothe the pain...wonderful read :)

    Take Care

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  15. Love you poem and what better way than to have the rains cleanse all the pain and sadness. Beautiful

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  16. Touched my heart Simran..

    Someone is Special

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  17. Rain does wash away all the pain and sadness from our hearts, and it fills us with hope and love again. Lovely poem Simran...

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  18. Thank you so much all for your wonderful comments...made me smile:)..Enjoy the rain :D

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  19. In this beautiful rain my heart wants to forget it's pain and to let enter the shimmering pearls into my vein.

    I really loved the poem :) Excellent work! I really liked the lines I mentioned...

    Short poem and a long comment thread... oh gosh! :D
    Well that's the mark of a quality writer :) Great job! Cheers :)

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  20. GvSparx - Inspiring Lives,
    Thank you so much dear :)

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  21. I love the rain especially when it is a hot summerday that ends in a thunderstorm. I love to dance in the rain and stamp in the pools. A wonderfull poem. Thank you for sharing.

    Namaste

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  22. perfectly amazing story.

    you rock.

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  23. A wonderful tribute to rain! Nicely done!
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  24. Just like the rain u started strong and then weak and ended with sweetness.... Pain and happiness both felt in the rain.
    cheers
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  25. The Noiseless CuckooclockDecember 9, 2011 at 11:23 PM

    Thanks for sharing.
    what a profound story in poetic form.
    :)

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~Simran