Friday, February 18, 2011

Thinking OF You


Thinking of you ; I smiled,
Thinking of you; I cried,
Thinking of you made me dreamy,
Thinking of you made me dreary,
I asked myself why this is so?
My heart insisted and replied!
It's because as much as I cared for you as the same I feared of loosing you!!
I told my heart that their is only one about whom I think day and night ;
And that's my love,
Not even the segment of my life ,
It's when I found you near to me; I cherish,
And when I found you far ;
I found my world perish!
Your presence made my life mirthful,
Your presence made my life beautiful,
Sometimes my heart depressed without you..
And my heart said ;
I am incomplete without you!
Your absence made my life worthless,
Whenever I found myself alone,
Your words comes into my mind like a beautiful tone,
Whenever I close my eyes your dreams and thoughts made me realize,
That their is nothing to cheer without you in my life!
SIMRAN KAUR.

37 comments:

  1. "Thinkin of you".............

    "I admire this awesome poem"...

    Rock on.........

    Someone is Special

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  2. hmmm indeed we are incomplete without the love of our life...

    lovely poem .. Take care

    Bikram's

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  3. Ah love, its all over this blog.

    Nice lines.

    :)

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  4. Its so Beautiful :)

    Where there is Love...fear does prevails itself

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  5. @PsycheBubbles
    Welcome to my blog :)
    Thank You !
    Keep visiting..

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  6. @ Someone Special
    Thanks a lot for admiring my work!
    You too keep rocking dear :)
    Keep Visiting!


    @The Blue Periwinkle
    Welcome to my blog!
    Thanks :)

    @Bikramjit
    Thanks a lot dear :)
    You too take care!

    @Blasphemous Aesthete
    Thanks dear..You made my day!
    Keep visiting :)

    @Beyond Horizon
    Ya that's true!
    Thanks dear :)

    @sm
    Thanks a lot :)
    Keep visiting!

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  7. Very nice poem. Loved this line

    Your absence made my life worthless

    :)

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  8. @Talha
    Thanks dear :)
    Keep Visiting!

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  9. Here on the blog for the 1st time and simply loved the post Awesome is the words that suits your post...

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  10. @Abnormal Thinker
    Welcome to my blog :)
    Thanks for appreciating my post!
    Keep Visiting ..

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  11. WoW!!!!!!! Really beautifull Sim :) Really amazing. Also very beautifull changes you have made in this page. Which reminds me Life is Colourfull & Beautifull too :)

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  12. @P-kay
    Welcome back to my blog :)
    Glad that my changes reminded you that Life is colourful and beautiful!
    Thanks a lot for appreciating my work.

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  13. Its very nice....one can feel it if they love someone :)

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  14. @Anonymous
    Welcome To my blog :)
    Thanks a lot!
    Hoping your more visits and valuable comments on my space in future too :)

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  15. @Hema di
    Thank you :)
    Keep visiting !

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  16. I just came across your blog and must say its lovely...something or the other has to have a pinch of love in it !

    This was a beautiful poem.

    Keep writing and blogging :)

    Do visit my blog too...

    Take Care,
    Fatima

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  17. @duskndawn
    Welcome to My Blog :)
    I am Glad that you liked my work ..
    Thank You!
    Keep Visiting dear :)

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  18. my my u seems to be in a deep love with someone....
    great poem i must say..
    and all these raining little stars on your blog are making it look really cute and girlie...
    keep blogging.. and I am following u back.

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  19. hey.... where is my comment????

    what happened simran.....

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  20. @Rolling stone
    Welcome to my blog :)
    Thinking of love i wrote all these :)
    Glad that you liked it !

    Thanks for following me :)
    Keep Visiting ..

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  21. @Irfan
    Didn't got your comment :(

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  22. there are always certain people or certain relation in our life without whom there is nothing to cheer about in our life....

    nice thoughts, simran.

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  23. I loved your blog. It's so beautiful! The poem is also so beautiful i just loved it. Really sweet one. thanks for sharing ur link wid me. My cute and best wishes for you always.....Simran! :)

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  24. @ Mohinee
    Welcome to My blog :-)
    Happy to see you here ...
    Thanks for your precious wishes and appreciating my blog ..
    Keep Vising :)

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  25. hi simran

    thanks for visiting my blog & being my follower.....u have a cute blog with cute poetry.....

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  26. @ Sumanmeet
    Hi :)
    welcome to my blog..
    Thanks dear :)
    Keep Visiting..

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  27. romance at its best, nicely done!!! and thanks for your visit and sweet comment! i appreciate it.

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  28. @Shadow
    Welcome to my blog :)
    Thank you :)
    Keep Visiting..

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  29. was browsin through ma frnd's blog n found u there....glad i came to ur blog....coz this poems is super cool....love flowin in every line...n u relatd it to a walk to remembr...so it was like cherry on the cake...simply loved it...

    take care
    Vaisakhi...

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  30. @Vaisakhi
    Welcome to My Blog :)
    I am honoured!
    Glad that you liked my blog and post :)
    Thanks a lot for following me ..
    Following you back now :-D

    You too take care ..
    Keep Visiting :))

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  31. Beautifully penned down... Very touching, the emotions came out really well...
    Have a wonderful day:-)

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  32. @Arti
    Welcome to my blog :)
    Thank You..
    You too have a Wonderful and cheerful day :)

    Take care..and keep Visiting!

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Either positive or negative comments are good because it shows I am still relevant. Hope you enjoyed reading here:-) !!
~Simran