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Haiku : Ascent

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World illuminates
with the preen light of Sun rise
evading darkness 


When I find a bird 
soaring high in the wide sky
sigh! my life, a cage


April A2Z Heights - Day 01 - Ascent

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  1. PranitaApril 1, 2013 at 4:46 PM

    WEll written :)
    Ascent to surface

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    1. SimranApril 2, 2013 at 11:45 AM

      Happy to have your words, Pranita...thanks :)

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  2. JeevanApril 1, 2013 at 6:36 PM

    Simple and significant! Enjoyed both the poems, Simran :)

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    1. SimranApril 2, 2013 at 11:51 AM

      Glad you enjoyed the read :)
      Thank you so much!

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  3. Ramesh SoodApril 1, 2013 at 7:06 PM

    The second one took my heart for a flight..

    RS

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    1. SimranApril 2, 2013 at 11:53 AM

      Appreciation from you is really something great! :)
      Thank you so much...

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  4. Sankara Jayanth SApril 1, 2013 at 7:46 PM

    the second one.. intense!! I hope you will one day realize you have wings too and that you too can fly.. you made your haiku fly, you sure can fly yourself. All the best. :)
    Ascent.

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  5. SGApril 1, 2013 at 9:27 PM

    Beautiful Haiku.

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  6. AnonymousApril 1, 2013 at 10:31 PM

    I remembered the book "The Notebook" saying I want to be a bird.
    Nice Haiku. :)

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  7. ʞɐApril 2, 2013 at 8:45 AM

    Nicely Written. :)

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    1. SimranApril 2, 2013 at 11:55 AM

      Happy to see you following my blog!
      Thanks,Ajay! :)

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  8. Amrit SinhaApril 2, 2013 at 1:21 PM

    Comparison with a bird ... now that's real beauty !!!

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