Skip to main content

Haiku : Ascent

Image
By

World illuminates
with the preen light of Sun rise
evading darkness 


When I find a bird 
soaring high in the wide sky
sigh! my life, a cage


April A2Z Heights - Day 01 - Ascent

Labels:

Comments

  1. PranitaApril 1, 2013 at 4:46 PM

    WEll written :)
    Ascent to surface

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. SimranApril 2, 2013 at 11:45 AM

      Happy to have your words, Pranita...thanks :)

      Delete
  2. JeevanApril 1, 2013 at 6:36 PM

    Simple and significant! Enjoyed both the poems, Simran :)

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. SimranApril 2, 2013 at 11:51 AM

      Glad you enjoyed the read :)
      Thank you so much!

      Delete
  3. Ramesh SoodApril 1, 2013 at 7:06 PM

    The second one took my heart for a flight..

    RS

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. SimranApril 2, 2013 at 11:53 AM

      Appreciation from you is really something great! :)
      Thank you so much...

      Delete
  4. Sankara Jayanth SApril 1, 2013 at 7:46 PM

    the second one.. intense!! I hope you will one day realize you have wings too and that you too can fly.. you made your haiku fly, you sure can fly yourself. All the best. :)
    Ascent.

    ReplyDelete
  5. SGApril 1, 2013 at 9:27 PM

    Beautiful Haiku.

    ReplyDelete
  6. AnonymousApril 1, 2013 at 10:31 PM

    I remembered the book "The Notebook" saying I want to be a bird.
    Nice Haiku. :)

    ReplyDelete
  7. ʞɐApril 2, 2013 at 8:45 AM

    Nicely Written. :)

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. SimranApril 2, 2013 at 11:55 AM

      Happy to see you following my blog!
      Thanks,Ajay! :)

      Delete
  8. Amrit SinhaApril 2, 2013 at 1:21 PM

    Comparison with a bird ... now that's real beauty !!!

    ReplyDelete

Post a Comment

Either positive or negative comments are good because it shows I am still relevant. Hope you enjoyed reading here:-) !!
~Simran

Popular posts from this blog

Life's Crux- Had and Lost ( Fiction: 55 )

By
This post has been published by me as a part of the Blog-a-Ton 30 ; the thirtieth edition of the online marathon of Bloggers; where we decide and we write. To be part of the next edition, visit and start following Blog-a-Ton . ''People forgets by the time the loss you faced.  '' So True! Everything seems fine on this sandy beach like any other evening in orange shade. Laughter can be heard by everyone but no one can listen scream. ' ' Hey Sea, You swallowed him, I wont' forgive you even if your waves touches my feet Million times''                                                 Shadorma   (Syllable- 3-5-3-3-7-5)                                                           ...
60 comments
about more ->

Caricature

By
~ My Sketches ~ Lord Krishna Creativity through a lead rotate, swing or slightly veer paint, shade or simply sketch  draw ,erase and redraw  until you give it a perfect stretch  fill hues with color pencils, acrylic, water paint or let them remain Black and White evergreen and fresh give border , an outline or sharpen the edges Scribble your thoughts and imaginations let them be free as an illustration they speaks of your heart no matter how sweet or bitter flourish your talent as it give immense pleasure ease your pain  adroit your wings of your dreams to destiny  revitalize your vigor   Gopies admiring Lord Krishna
58 comments
about more ->

Let it be A Suspense

By
This post has been published by me as a part of the Blog-a-Ton 31 ; the thirty-first edition of the online marathon of Bloggers; where we decide and we write. To be part of the next edition, visit and start following Blog-a-Ton . The theme for the month is 'Strangers in the Night' Oops! I missed my bus  Its Hilarious! to wait   while saying she draws a sad face on the wall.                     Next night... She is before the time and is dumbstruck to see the sad face she sketched now smiling. Sweet, who could be...? Let it be a Suspense!   ''Strangers In The Night'' she writes and leave . The fellow Blog-a-Tonics who took part in this Blog-a-Ton and links to their respective posts can be checked here . To be part of the next edition, visit and start following Blog-a-Ton . Introduced By: Someone is Special , Participation Count: 06
51 comments
about more ->