The more you wait; the more it gets late
The more expect; the more it hurts you exact
The more you try to make; the more situations tend to break
The more you find reasons; the more you get in confusion
The more you try to show; the more you get outshone
The more you have; the more things you have to loose
The more you dare; the more you bear
But
The more you share; the more you cheer
The more you love; the more you be loved
The more you try; the more things come by
The more imagine; the more your thoughts be designed
The more you believe within; the more stronger even the fate tries to make you win
The more challenges you accept; the more opportunities your way precept
The more you be true; the more you be You!
P.S.- I wrote this as a fun scribble but soon realized worth to share with you all. I would love to read yours ''the more...''
@Simran --> this is really too good. .! very well written, depicting the anarchy of life
ReplyDeleteGlad you liked it :)
DeleteThank you so much, Sulaiman
I loved the beautiful thoughts in this piece ... a really matured writing :-)
ReplyDeleteI waits eagerly to know your views .. :)
DeleteGlad you liked it! Thank you so much, Amrit
Nice style of writing.
ReplyDeleteGood work. :)
Thanks Vinay!
DeleteJust tried something..glad you liked it!
You are a little girl but you have so much in your little mind to share and what a good heart Simran..
ReplyDeleteI ma glad you shared this with us, it is so very true what you have written and that too in such simple words ...
very true any second is time to change ..
God bless you little one .. take care
Bikram's
I am so happyyyyyyyyy to receive such a beautiful comment from my Bikram dear :)
DeleteI am delighted that you liked it and realized my words so deeply. Thank you so much for your constant support. I am blessed having such a dear one as you :)
Take care !
Wonderful writing! Its true that sometimes the more we try the farther we get from our goal, but it also brings about opportunities.
ReplyDeleteJillien,
DeleteI agree to what you said ..
Thank you so much for stopping by! Hope to see you again :)
How truly written Simran! Each phrase simply conjoins worth and significant.
ReplyDeleteKeep it up :)
Glad to know that dear :)
DeleteThank you so much!!
too sad that some times, the more we share, the more negative people become.
ReplyDeletelove your positive take on life.
Thanks, Terri!
DeleteGlad to have you at My Friendship! :)
Actually you have written the facts....but then very poetically :) Good job
ReplyDeleteKeep writing
Cheers,
Dawn
Thank you so much, Dawn...Happy to read your words :)
DeleteWish you a Happy Writing too!
for sure, tis is not just fun but more inspirational...
ReplyDeletethanks for sharing...
Well you can call it as an inspirational scribble :)
DeleteThanks, Deeps :)
powerful quote.
ReplyDeleteGlad you found it powerful, Aya :)
DeleteThanks a lot!
A very matured one! I must say that when one put her heart more, the more she gets followed. This one has really touched me! Beautiful piece! :)
ReplyDeleteThe compliment of maturity makes me happy and confident! Thanks dear :)
DeleteHappppyyy me! you felt my words so deeply! :)
Thanks a lot dear!
elegant...
ReplyDeletethe way you flirt with words is amazing.
Thanks Jacobin :)
Deletedeep.
ReplyDeleteThank you :)
DeleteTouching words nicely spun together :)
ReplyDeleteMeoww,
DeleteGlad to have you dear :)
Thank you so much!
good one ...lovely presentation :)
ReplyDeleteliked the front image of my friendship ....you a beautiful blog dear!!
Firstly, I wanna thank you Anu from the bottom of my heart for your constant support and love! I feel blessed:)
DeleteHappy u liked it!
Wow! You noticed the header image! Glad :)
Thank you so much dear.
agree.
ReplyDeletemasterful words to show that love does magic.
Helen,
DeleteLove is magical :)
Thank you so much..
Really awesome lines Simi!...esp loved this line..."The more you believe within; the more stronger even the fate tries to make you win"
ReplyDeleteB.t.w....How r u?...Hope you are doing well...Missing you!
Valli dear,
DeleteI am sooo happyyy you loved it! :)
Cheers!
I am doing great dear..How's ya? Awww :(
I'm good too dear :)
DeleteHope to see you soon!
take care :)
too good. loved it !
ReplyDeleteGlad!
Deletethank you so much dear :)
beautiful blog theme. these falling balls are really lovely
ReplyDeleteHappy you liked blog's theme :)
DeleteThanks
well written, great thoughts
ReplyDeletehappy Diwali !!!
thanks
Glad you liked! Thanks :)
DeleteHappy Diwali to you too :) :)
dearie..this is the first time I'm leaving comment on your blog...
ReplyDeleteIts great and thought-provoking post that everyone should realise...all the lines that you have mentioned....
good attempt and great writing dear... :)
keep blogging...wish you good luck..
Hearty Welcome to My Friendship, Madhavi :)
DeleteHappy reading your appreciation. Thank you so much. Hope to receive your constant support :)
Good luck to u too!
Can I copy this?
ReplyDeleteIn my diary please?
Ah!! I have missed this place :)
How are you my dear friend?
How sweeet of you!
DeleteYa sure you can copy this in your diary :-)
Missed ya too..
I am good. How are you?
Thank you :)
DeleteWell are you having your exams too?
I just went through the disaster :P
Oh AND SORRY I had to mail you, I am doing it right now :)
Yes dear I am going to have a disastrous series of exams from 14th till 29th :( :P
DeleteHow was your exam? All the best for the result... May you come up with flying colors :) :)
Yes yes .. I am waiting eagerly from so long to receive your mail :)
The more I read you; the more I adore reading!
ReplyDeleteThanks little one for this beautiful one..
Someone is Special
I am flying! :)
DeleteThe more you appreciate me the more I get inspired.
Thanks a lot :-)