wow....this is one of the deepest haikus i ve ever read...strong n gripping...6 lines 24 words but 100watt power feeling strikin at ones...awesome write...:)
I don’t believe in soul exists... but I appreciate your thoughts indeed and perhaps u have reasons on credence. I believe conscience is based on sense and observation!
hmmmm...strong words indeed!
ReplyDeletesome times I wonder what should I comment that would convey my thoughts very well :)
lovely dear :)
Happy to know that! :)
DeleteThanks a lot chweetss! :)
Interesting thoughts Simran! :)
ReplyDeleteN thanks for stopping by! It's quite a coincidence that i had this frnd calld Simran back in school days n i always told her that i loved her name! ;)
Glad you felt it interesting! :)
DeleteAwww :) that's cute to know!
wow....this is one of the deepest haikus i ve ever read...strong n gripping...6 lines 24 words but 100watt power feeling strikin at ones...awesome write...:)
ReplyDeleteHi Vaisakhi!
DeleteYeyyy! :) Your words making me fly! Whoa! 100 W power in my words!
Thank you so much! Happyyyy me!
BTW..How's life going ?
Lovely words ... I could feel the depth in them !!!
ReplyDeleteGlad you can feel my words :)
DeleteThanks , Amrit!
A wandering, listless soul can be a sad, maybe tragic soul!
ReplyDeleteThat's true, Gemma!
DeleteHappy to have you here. Thanks! :)
beautiful (and big) words.....Made me think.....think about 'when a soul escapes'
ReplyDeleteThank you so much joanne :)
DeletePleasure to have you ...
excellent set...second one was exceptional...too good... :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Sarab! :)
DeleteStay Smiling buddy!
Wow...!
ReplyDeleteI really loved the line 'Lust to be alive'
Awesome one Simi!
Thanks Valli! :)
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Thanks Rahul! :)
DeleteFound this one a bit heavier from you Simran..you are evolving into a wonderfyl thinking poet.. well done..and blessings..
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Welcome to My Friendship , Ramesh ji!
DeleteReally its a huge honor for me to have such appreciating words from one of the great Poet!
Thanks a lot! :)
powerful words indeed! :)
ReplyDeleteGlad you felt my words powerful!
DeleteThank you so much! :)
I don’t believe in soul exists... but I appreciate your thoughts indeed and perhaps u have reasons on credence. I believe conscience is based on sense and observation!
ReplyDeleteBest wishes, Simran :)
Happy to have your thoughts. Thank you so much :)
DeleteBest wishes to you too!
Smaller, the heavier!. Its a different world here at your blog Simran. :)
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Happy you feels a different world at my blog :)
DeleteOverwhelmed by your words. Thank you so much.
good i like it . and i want to be your friend read my blog...
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Glad you liked. Thanks
Deletebeautiful simran , I am not good at haikus ..
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Thanks Biks Dear :)
DeleteIt Ok! You are a good reader and thinker!
this is so short yet so deep. i'm blown away, simran! great haiku! <3 :-)
ReplyDeleteHappy to know that irene :)
Deletethanks a lot!
Wow!! Soulfully powerful!
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Happy Independence Day to you too! :)
Love your haiku .. i like second one :)
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Thanks for sharing
Welcome Anu! :)
DeleteGlad you liked :)
Thank you so much!
Loved it so much Little One!
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Glad :)
DeleteThanks Special One :) :)