This post has been published by me as a part of the Blog-a-Ton 54 ; the fifty-fourth edition of the online marathon of Bloggers; where we decide and we write. To be part of the next edition, visit and start following Blog-a-Ton . It was the first downpour of the season, vanquishing the summer heat. Jia, with her earnest brown eyes, was watching outside through a window glass. She was mesmerized to spot a peacock dancing beautifully on the terrace of a distant building. She saw a crowd standing outside under the cafe roof, waiting for the rain to stop and so that they could continue to walk toward their respective destinations. Jia was a sensitive child and mature beyond an eight year old. There were two kinds of people she found standing under the roof. Some of them were silent and calm enjoying the pleasant rains, like her. Whereas, others were despite being strangers were friendly enough to start a conversation for a while. Jia could see them smiling, exchanging numbers. Maybe they ...
whatta moment that was! :),.nicely expressed!
ReplyDeleteOne of my fav. moment! :)
DeleteThanks Jaideep :)
Awesome haiku dear!...Yes indeed, Very cherishing and memorizing moments!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much , Valli Dear! :)
DeleteBeautiful and really beautiful.
ReplyDeleteMohu :)
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Simran, you appear to an ardent Cricket Fan.. any cricketer from the family.. yes, it refills..zeal..
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Thank you so much Ramesh ji.Hope to have you here as my regular reader and critic as well :-)
feelings haiku ~ well done ~thanks, namaste, ^_^
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Thank you so much dear :)
Indeed. Winning is a great motivator.
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DeleteWinning enumerates confidence.
Thanks, Patti :)
that was an awesome moment..
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ReplyDeleteYep! So delightful and one of my fav. moments :)
Thank you :-)
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