This post has been published by me as a part of the Blog-a-Ton 54 ; the fifty-fourth edition of the online marathon of Bloggers; where we decide and we write. To be part of the next edition, visit and start following Blog-a-Ton . It was the first downpour of the season, vanquishing the summer heat. Jia, with her earnest brown eyes, was watching outside through a window glass. She was mesmerized to spot a peacock dancing beautifully on the terrace of a distant building. She saw a crowd standing outside under the cafe roof, waiting for the rain to stop and so that they could continue to walk toward their respective destinations. Jia was a sensitive child and mature beyond an eight year old. There were two kinds of people she found standing under the roof. Some of them were silent and calm enjoying the pleasant rains, like her. Whereas, others were despite being strangers were friendly enough to start a conversation for a while. Jia could see them smiling, exchanging numbers. Maybe they ...
Lovely again.
ReplyDeleteI knew it wasn't yours. The thought is so different :)Loved it little one. I'm so proud of your grandma :)
ReplyDeleteBeautiful work by your Grand ma :) xx
ReplyDeleteThoughtful, and the ending lines are awesome Little one..
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Hello Simran dear.
ReplyDeleteI love your Grand ma's words...so true & penned like a poet.
Lovely.
Please say "Thank You" to her for me & thanks to you to Simran dear, for sharing her words.
I like the new background too.
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All the best to you & your family for the Holidays!
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ReplyDeleteकविता, सार है |
उत्तम!
Cheers,
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Hello my best wishes for these dates as indicated
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Happy New Year 2012!.
A hug.
fabulous piece…smiles.
ReplyDeleteGreetings:
Hope that you have had a great Merry Christmas.
Happy New Year.
Share a piece of your poetry today at our poetry party today, 1 to 3 random poems are welcome in general, old ones are okay.
hope to see you in.
Have fun!
Sending you love and blessings.
Cheers.
xoxox
very nice.
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Marvelous....superb...Love the last line most...."kavi ki upadhi hai"...
ReplyDeletewow so nice lines.....
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