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हर पल मे है मदहोशी,
हर पल एक बात जो  है एक  अन्छुपा राज़,
दिल की बात जुबान पे जो थमी,
किसी के  दिल  की धड़कने बढ़ी ,
इस पल से वाकिफ हैं हम दोनों 
और अनजान इसकी गहराई से,
ये कैसा राज़ है ?
जिससे वाकिफ है सारा जहान,
उस राज मे जो बात है,
वो एक अनछिपा राज़ है l


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  1. SnehaAugust 21, 2011 at 6:28 PM

    Arey waah Hindi main poem...nice

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  2. Alpana JaiswalAugust 21, 2011 at 6:34 PM

    Loved it Simran,simple but it says a lot,showing your innocence.

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  3. fantasy in practicalityAugust 21, 2011 at 6:46 PM

    mysteriously romantic, loved your poetry, sim, wonderful:))

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  4. Melissa TandocAugust 21, 2011 at 7:21 PM

    I liked some particular lines here little one...इस पल से वाकिफ हैं हम दोनों
    और अनजान इसकी गहराई से (google translated as, We are aware of the moment And unaware of its depth).

    A poetry so concise yet so profound. Admirable little one :)

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  5. GeetaSinghAugust 21, 2011 at 7:25 PM

    romantic hmmm sim sim :) very sweet poem..

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  6. sHoNaAugust 21, 2011 at 7:53 PM

    Really nicely written

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  7. DaydreamertooAugust 21, 2011 at 10:53 PM

    Hello there, trying to fins your Carry on Tuesday link to read you.

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  8. VaisakhiAugust 21, 2011 at 11:42 PM

    romantic stuff....i m seriously likin this side of urs...beautiful write...:)

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  9. Hema NimbekarAugust 22, 2011 at 4:09 PM

    nice one....:):) sweet, simple yet have depth...:):)

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  10. NankaAugust 22, 2011 at 4:53 PM

    Beautifully expressed and you cannot find a better language than Urdu to express it accurately!!
    As this place has participation from all over it would be helpful if you could put a gist of the poem in English!! Its essence would then be enjoyed by a wider audience!! :)


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  11. Someone is SpecialAugust 22, 2011 at 8:27 PM

    Sim, loved it so much.. sweet picture and words..

    Someone is Special

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  12. Blasphemous AestheteAugust 22, 2011 at 9:59 PM

    Beautiful :)
    Reminds me of a song,

    aaj kal tere mere pyaar ke charche har zubaan par, sabko maloom hai aur sabko khabar ho gayi :D


    Cheers,
    Blasphemous Aesthete

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  13. AnonymousAugust 23, 2011 at 1:24 AM

    Very interesting points. Thanks!

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