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Moon Night


The white moon's gleam scattered all over the sky,
These millions of glittering stars are brightening above so high,
Giving a shine with full of divine so that the dark sky could also shine..
Making the night full of mystery that seems like attractive chemistry..
Stars scatters like a rope,
And it's shining light brings a hope,
They every time indicates that we must not loose our hope even in the dark because sunrise is just a minute away!

Agreement for Thursday Poets Rally Week 57 (December 1-7, 2011)

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  1. Alpana JaiswalMay 20, 2011 at 5:24 PM

    Its great seeing you back,with a beautiful post..

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  2. Mohini PuranikMay 20, 2011 at 5:29 PM

    It's wonderful poem dear, happy to see you again active here. last lines made the poem Super wonderful! like you! :) loved your poem!

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  3. rivercatMay 20, 2011 at 7:26 PM

    Beautiful message and writing
    xo

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  4. Melissa TandocMay 20, 2011 at 7:47 PM

    i like this post little one... it's something i hold close to my heart... and most of the time darkness scares me...but God created HOPE as well...
    so i need not fear...

    it's great to have you back...hugs :)

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  5. HopeMay 20, 2011 at 10:48 PM

    beautifully said, Simran! I love your stars

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  6. SimranMay 21, 2011 at 11:11 AM

    @Alpana
    Thank you so much ,Alpana:)
    Take care!

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  7. SimranMay 21, 2011 at 11:13 AM

    @Mohu
    Me too very happy of my come back :)
    Missed you all so much! ..Glad that you liked it! :D
    Take care.

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  8. SimranMay 21, 2011 at 11:14 AM

    @Rivercat
    Happy that you got my message! :)
    Thank you..
    Take care

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  9. SimranMay 21, 2011 at 11:16 AM

    @Melissa,
    I'm so happy that it reached to your heart! :)
    Thank you so much , Dear one!
    Hugsssss and Love :) :)
    Take care!

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  10. SimranMay 21, 2011 at 11:23 AM

    @Hope,
    Hi,
    Thank you so much...and I like your presence:) :)
    Take care.

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  11. Hema NimbekarMay 21, 2011 at 5:56 PM

    sweet, short n simple but yeah very impressive poem....just pure as early morning when both moon and sun face each other....and visible to us...hehehehe...

    good one...simran...

    visit my blog..

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  12. Ph_May 21, 2011 at 9:45 PM

    One thing for sure I love is visiting this one special blog :)
    As for your post, well expressed :) Indeed one must not lose hope and stay in search of glow even in the darkest times :)

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  13. Mari Sterling WilburMay 22, 2011 at 11:37 AM

    Very lovely! Your writings always inspire me!

    http://www.mariscamera.blogspot.com/

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  14. SimranMay 22, 2011 at 1:42 PM

    @Hema di,
    Thank you so much! :)
    Ya sure...
    Take care

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  15. SimranMay 22, 2011 at 2:51 PM

    @Ph_
    I'm so happy that you mentioned my blog as special!
    Thank you..

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  16. SimranMay 22, 2011 at 2:52 PM

    @Mari Sterling Wilbur
    Thanks :)

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  17. Blasphemous AestheteMay 22, 2011 at 10:16 PM

    Even the stars that merely twinkle from here hold the promise of fire within them, fire, stronger that that in our Sun. All telling the same story, hold on, don't give up, there is dawn.

    Nice write.


    Cheers,
    Blasphemous Aesthete

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  18. ⁂ܓVållῐ ⁂ܓ☺May 25, 2011 at 12:12 PM

    Lovely....inspiring poem :)
    with gr8 example

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  19. SimranMay 31, 2011 at 9:20 PM

    @Anshul:
    Thanks :)

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  20. SimranMay 31, 2011 at 9:20 PM

    @Valli:
    Thank you :)

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  21. The Orange TreeNovember 30, 2011 at 10:10 PM

    dynamic and fantastic imagery.


    love your blog,
    Thanks for sharing.

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  22. AnonymousNovember 30, 2011 at 10:18 PM

    Love reading about the stars with the effect of "falling stars" drifting down while I did so ... Nicely done!

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  23. William LeedDecember 1, 2011 at 5:52 AM

    Very nicely done! A starry moonlit night is often inspirational.
    William

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  24. The PoetDecember 1, 2011 at 6:37 AM

    Hello.
    Even when the burdens of life seem to heavy to bear, there's always a ray of hope. powerful message from you Simran dear.
    Nicely done!
    Thanks for sharing.

    Thanks also for taking part in the Party. The final poem has turned out marvelous & the after party video is hilarious. Your talents know no bounds.
    Thanks again my dear.

    Daydreaming

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  25. JANUDecember 1, 2011 at 12:30 PM

    So true...nice.

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  26. AnonymousDecember 1, 2011 at 2:15 PM

    There is so much inspiration and hope in this poem.. in the stars and moon of the night sky:))

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  27. SimranDecember 1, 2011 at 8:09 PM

    The Orange Tree,
    Glad to have you here..
    Thank you so much dear :)

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  28. SimranDecember 1, 2011 at 8:10 PM

    beccagivens,
    Glad you liked the post!
    Stars are so beautiful..reflects a hope :)

    Thank you so much!

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  29. SimranDecember 1, 2011 at 8:10 PM

    William Leed ,
    Welcome to my blog!
    Thank you :)

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  30. SimranDecember 1, 2011 at 8:13 PM

    Andy,
    Hello Andy Dear,
    Your comments always make me smile!
    Thank you so much for the appreciation and for encouraging words :)
    You are one of the best here !!

    And I'm happy to be the part of that glorious party..
    Great work by you!

    Stay smiling :))

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  31. SimranDecember 1, 2011 at 8:14 PM

    JANU ,
    Thank you :)

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  32. SimranDecember 1, 2011 at 8:15 PM

    sajeevkmenon,
    Glad you enjoyed the post!
    Thank you so much! :)
    Hope to have you here again..

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  33. ChèvrefeuilleDecember 2, 2011 at 3:09 PM

    Namaste

    What a nice poem. Stars shimmering above my head when I read this poem. Loved it. Thank you for sharing this enlightened thought of yours.

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  34. Miss KittenDecember 3, 2011 at 7:19 PM

    I must say that as nice as this piece is, the music distracts from the enjoyment of it. Your words shine enough all on their own.

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  35. KayDecember 4, 2011 at 5:13 AM

    "sunrise is just a minute away" lovely!

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  36. SimranDecember 4, 2011 at 11:57 AM

    Chèvrefeuille,
    Namaste!
    So happy to read your comment :)
    Thank you so much!

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  37. SimranDecember 4, 2011 at 11:57 AM

    Miss Kitten,
    Thank you so much! :)

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  38. SimranDecember 4, 2011 at 11:58 AM

    Kay,
    So just move on keeping this thought in mind!

    Thank you so much! :)

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  39. Blossom VydrinaDecember 8, 2011 at 12:08 PM

    just found your blog, what an adorable theme! I love the owl :)

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