Tuesday, July 24, 2012

Inescapable Divulge


Few says eyes are the mysterious window of one's heart
Few says eyes are the treasure of unsaid words
But I say... eyes are the inescapable divulge 
Capitulate the elegance ; a flow of emote 
Eases the pain, explicit the shattered dreams
Reveal thousands of words but rarely finds someone who can read
A sight of Capacious the inescapable divulge
Does not end here...
It has to see , contemplate and descry the espy of harsh realities!
That may even perplex, perturb or torment
Heart fears but the eyes remain...
A sight of Capacious the inescapable divulge

32 comments:

  1. this is so beautiful. the eyes are the window to one's soul, but you were able to describe it with more depth. <3 :-)

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    1. Glad to know you liked expressions of my thoughts and felt the depth in my words as well as my feelings.It feels great to see someone understanding you and your thoughts. Thank you so much ,irene. Pleasure to have you :)

      Stay Inspired and Inspiring! :)

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  2. My dear Simran,
    Well written my friend. The eyes can even speak the unspoken language of love. Your talent makes me smile.

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    1. Andy Dear,

      Eyes reflects one's inner-persona, emotions that sometimes people tend to hide but they fails when someone (Close one) reads the reality against the virtual circumstances that one builds to hide.

      Glad to make you smile :)
      Keep Smiling ...

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  3. They are a mystery, a ocean you dive in and what not. Beautiful work and I loved the imaginary and use of words!

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    1. I waits eagerly to know your views and really your words makes my day. Thank you so much,Saru!
      Happy you liked imagery and my words :)
      P.S.- Your suggestions are always welcome. Correct me if I do mistakes, I won't mind but love!:)

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    1. Thank you so much, Rahul!
      Pleasure to have you here :) :)

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  5. You have written it so well ... loved the flow of words !!!

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  6. I agree with you quite... and you well wrote on the reliable source, even the words fail in the process of expressing.

    Beautiful Simran :)
    Best wishes

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    1. It's always nice to read your views. Thank you so much for sharing! :)
      Happy you liked!
      Thank you so much for the wishes and sharing views...
      Stay Smiling!

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  7. We are always in the path of contemplation of someone who could read our eyes & its in depth story.....'the inescapable divulge'. You have poured your emotions here.

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    1. Well, that's true in my case. I always seeks someone who could read my eyes... And its my dad who reads my mind and even false smile. I am lucky to have my dear dad! my inspiration :)
      Actually, Its too important to have someone in life who could read and guide you.

      Hmm... my emotions...I have much more to say than this. Will share them later after exploring! :)

      Thank you so much gayatri! your presence makes me happy!!

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  8. eyes sure r the inescapable divulge a sea where u see the clear reflection of the world outside as well as the tormented storms of ur heart...amazin lines...loved it...:)

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    1. Awww :)
      Loved the short description you wrote...so strong your words too! :)
      Thanks buddy! Glad you liked.

      Be in touch and Take Care

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    1. They do... :)
      Thanks for gracing my work by your words.

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  10. Eyes say many an unspoken words too Simran. Lovely poetry

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    1. Thank you so much , Rahul ji :) :)

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  11. well , I feel the eyes have a secret ability to never lie :):)
    what more can be more beautiful than truth!

    very well written dear!
    keep going on sweetie pie !!! :):)

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    1. That's true! :)

      Ek noor si chamak hai in aankhon mein ...
      Dil mein chipi baat...teri aankhon mein jhalakti hai!

      Thanks Dear!

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  12. Two profound words that define the sight and the soul :)

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  13. "Reveal thousands of words but rarely finds someone who can read" - absolutely true and beautiful, but I thought this line can be changed a little, still, this is a beautiful work Little One.. Keep writing..

    Someone is Special

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    1. May something happens in a positive direction and my words get change.
      You know... How hard it is for me to keep patience to read your words!

      Happy you felt it beautiful :)
      Thank you so much.

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    2. Hmm :(

      Its OK! Special One..Take it easy :)

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  14. Such great words, written with so much truth. Eyes surely are mirror of one's heart and it speaks millions of things in a moment. I loved what you wrote Simran.. You really are a nice writer :)Keep Writing!

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    1. Hi Pallavi!

      So happy to have you here. Thank you so much for complimenting me with such encouraging words and stopping by!
      Pleasure to have you :)

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~Simran