Sunday, November 13, 2011

Marvel With Surf Excel Matic

It was a Sunday afternoon.Lara was doing painting.The cell phone beeped,the screen flashed as ''Message received from Rhea''. Hey Lara, What are you doing?
She quickly replied her,''I'm making a girl's sillihoute ..What are you doing?''
After 2 minutes again Lara received a message from Rhea,''I'm selecting a dress for tonight's party..Aren't you joining us?''.
Lara replied her while holding the paint brush in her hand ,''Yes, Of course I'm coming..'Lara loves parties and parties loves Lara ' , Well I'm gonna be the show stopper tonight''. She teased Rhea. Again she resume to complete her sillihoute.
Suddenly the door bell rang..She chuckles ''Who's this now?'' keeping the paint brush besides the canvas she briskly walked towards the door. She get so happy to see the man from laundry holding her most prestigious and beautiful dress. It was a sea green colored gown with little stones and silver embroidery over it and a special gift she received from her granny last year on her birthday. She utters, ''Granny I love you for this''. 
The laundry man asked Lara to check if the dress is alright from every corner...
Lara chuckle with excitement,''Yes, thank you so much!''
The laundry man leaves ,Lara shut the door with a broad grin and excitement on her face.
She quickly send a text message to Rhea to inform about her so special dress, ''Hey Rhea, I've received my beautiful dress :) ''
She receives a message from one of her classmate, Neha ''Have you completed your Chemistry notes?''
Lara reply her ,''Yes I've completed and given to Sarika...You can borrow it from her but intimate me before taking! I'm little busy right now.''
And again the cell phone rings up!
Oh God! My fans can't even leave me for a second and laughs..
It was a call from her dad..She receive the call and utter softly, Hello Dad 
''Lara I'll  send car sharply by 7:00 PM .Do not make late because today's schedule is little busy and I've to go for a business meeting'' Lara's father informs her.
Making her father assure Lara chuckle, ''Sure dad, Don't worry! I'll be on time.''
That's my girl ! Say her father with satisfaction
And after the conversation Lara realized that from past 3 hours she was busy in gossip via sms and calls.
Oh God! My sillihoute is not completed yet! 
Now no more calls and msgs I'm going to reply! Huh!!
If I've started then I must not leave it incomplete but where the hell is my paint brush??
I'm so silly and unconscious , Lara utters when she see her dress kept near the Canvas.
Holding her so special sea green coloured gown she takes a long deep breath, and say ,Thank God ! It is safe..
She feels something wet and sticky on the other side on her dress and finds that she had left the paint brush filled with black colour below her dress and now the paint color mess up with her dress!
This was only left to be done! Sorry Grand ma I spoiled so special present from you..Forgive me! 
She uttered with tears in her eyes..   
She briskly walks towards her store room searched for the spray or other stain remover !
and found Surf Excel matic pack in wardrobe .


 She readily read with excitement  It's triple-powered formula ensures that the toughest of stains are removed easily in just one wash. So be it top load or front load, choosing Surf excel Matic makes perfect sense!
A little hope arise..
She dipped her dress in mild hot water with two little spoon of Surf Excel Matic and kept it for few mins .
After some time she thought to check if the colour vanished or not ...keeping her finger cross she took out her dress from the bucket and shouted with an enthrallment ''Yey! I can't believe the stain is no more! Wow ! the best magic I've ever experienced just in 5 mins  !
She stares at clock ..and found she was still left with 2 extra -hours .
Quick Lara quick you've to complete your painting for tomorrow's Great Painting Contest!! She uttered in excitement.
After the hard work and dedication of 2 hours she completed the painting which she was supposed to submit for the contest to be held the very next day. 
She was so beautiful that there was no need to use cosmetics and in no time she was ready to leave for the party!
The clock striked 7:00 PM and a knock on door. 
She opened the door and found car sent by her father to leave her to the event destiny.
She reached there in no time. There was a huge beautiful palace and the stairs were covered with red carpet. 
Everything was so lavish with the glory of decoration and high status people. There was so much of gathering.
A voice from my back aloud but was soft,'' Hey Lara! You're looking gorgeous ..A show stopper indeed!''  said Rhea.
Thanks Rhea!
And now there was an announcement .. there was a pin drop silence in that big hall gathered with so many people.
A man in black suit announced ,''Ladies and Gentleman today we have a special surprise guest  !! Yes a special surprise guest..Welcome to Robert Pattinson 
Again the hall sounded up with talking. 
the fellow announced to be silent and hear him..
''All the ladies hold your heart ..Today we will choose the woman in best get up and that lucky lady will be the dance partner of our tonight's special surprise guest!!
There were some crucial rounds and I was still left in a hope along with two competitors..
They were not the less!
Now Robert was invited on the stage to select the best one!
My heartbeats were so fast! 
His glimpse striked to mine . He smiled and holding my hand he announced me as his dancing partner and the most beautiful one !
It was like a dream come true!
This all miracle happened because of Surf Excel Matic! An instant  super magic indeed..
Because of it's prodigy formula I saved my time,completed my painting, got a chance to be the dancing partner of Robert Pattison and the most important one I saved my so special and precious gift I received from my Grand ma!


48 comments:

  1. A sweet, cute write-up. Loved the way the story flows.
    It's every teenagers fantasy come true, i guess. :)

    Janhvi - jojofeelings.wordpress.com

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  2. Hmm.. Good one Simran.. The extra two hours did so much for her.. She must be a happy girl.. All the best..

    Someone is Special

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  3. nice story line ,,,,well written...but u make me jelous ( got a chance to be the dancing partner of Robert Pattison )..... anyway nice1.

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  4. jojofeelings,
    Glad you liked it Janhvi..
    Thanks for your encouraging words :)

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  5. Someone is Special,
    Thank you so much for the wishes :)

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  6. shona,
    Thanks Shona :)
    Ahh..and here the cat war begins :P
    LOL

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  7. nicely penned ...cute nd sweettttttttttttt ...loved reading dis..no more calls ...no more sms :P

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  8. so wonderful little princess. my best wishes are always with you, carry on exploring your writting skills :)

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  9. Geeta,
    Hahah..well that will never happen with us ..I hope ;) LOL
    Thank you Sweet Geets :D

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  10. Mohinee,
    After so long ...
    Missed ya so much,
    Thank you Mohu for the wishes :D
    I'm blessed to have you sissy

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  11. fantacy in practicality ,
    Still I have to learn many things..
    Thank you so much Sanchi :)

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  12. Nice write-up dearo! Wish u alll the very best!!

    Love
    Mani

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  13. This was a very good write up. Enjoyed thoroughly!

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  14. what a beautiful way to spend the extra hours. Real worth.
    excellent penning.

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  15. u wrote this so very nicely, took me to some fantasy land really. wish I could have been there :P
    good luck for the contest!


    sarah

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  16. Hello.
    Ahh...what a wonderfully creative mind you have.
    Nice flow to this story & of course I always love happy endings.
    Wonderful job, Simran dear!
    I like the new background too.
    Thanks for sharing.

    Imaginary Dreams

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  17. Cool post. Best of luck. Please do visit my post Aye Zindagi!

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  18. good theme..n well written too :)

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  19. Very good write up Simran, very creatively written! All the very Best :)

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  20. Rahul Bhatia,
    Welcome to my blog..
    Glad you enjoyed the post..
    Thank you :)

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  21. Pramod,
    Welcome to my blog..
    Thank you so much dear :)

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  22. subtlescribbler,
    Awww :)
    So happy that you liked my post and also to have you here after so long..
    Missed ya ..

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  23. Andy,
    Hi Andy Dear :)
    Happy you liked the post and changes in blog! :D
    Thank you so much for praising me..

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  24. maliny,
    Welcome to my blog :)
    Thank you :)
    Hope to have you again..

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  25. Arti,
    Thank you so much Arti..So happy to have you here and being blessed by your wishes :)

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  26. anummunaf,
    Thanks dear :)
    I read your write ups..so touching!
    I hope everything get alright soon..take care

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  27. cool..simple and sweet..good luck..
    here s mine- http://zradar.wordpress.com/2011/11/17/we-learn-with-time-and-burn-the-same/

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  28. Hello Simran. Happy Friday!
    I have a gift for you dear.
    Please feel free to claim it here.

    Have a great weekend!

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  29. hi simran, nice writing.
    your picture reminds me of an old girlfriend . she had a nice smile like yours. :)

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  30. You have been tagged here : http://jojofeelings.wordpress.com/2011/11/25/award-from-me/

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  31. Simran very nicely written.. all the best
    and Dreams only come true for those who DREAM so keep dreaming ..


    Bikram's

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  32. Andy,
    Thanks Andy Dear for the award!
    I'm blessed and honored..

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  33. Rivercat,
    Hi Dear,
    Nice to have you here finally after so long..
    Wow! my smile reminds you of one,the part of your life..
    Happy to know..because memories are always sweet!

    Keep Smiling like me ! :)
    Because that's a best cosmetic..
    Thanks for the compliment..

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  34. Hema di,
    Thank you :)
    So happy to see you..

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  35. jojofeelings,
    Thank you so much for the award and encouragement..I really need it! :)

    Love and wishes..

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  36. Bikramjit,
    Where were you dear from so long?
    Missed ya :)
    Thank you so much!
    I agree!
    But it is possible only when I will be keep on sleeping ..and see these days I'm so restless!

    Thank you so much for your wishes..happy to have you back! :)

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  37. Robert's name caused a heart thump :P :D
    Nice!

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  38. Ph_
    Amaze to know that almost everyone loves Robert! :)

    Glad you liked it!
    Thank you so much buddy ..

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~Simran