There's a time in your life for you to dream And sometimes things aren't what they seam, The wish you to hold inside you precious heart.. And sometimes things change from the start! Then the magical moment that happens at last, A kiss, a touch, just a word can all happen so fast, On a night like tonight as I wish you were here, Holding me close to your heart so we're near, Each time I look into your eyes I know its true! All my life I have prayed for someone like you, Here is my heart its always been yours to keep, There is a feeling so strong if you dig down deep, I know that you know its a feeling so strong, I'd tell you I love you in a poem or even a song.. You've had my heart from the very first thought, This love was a priceless feeling, wasn't bought, I'll give you everything that comes along, This life we live is real, nothing could go wrong.. So here is my heart its yours to spoil and always hold,...
Hey, Hi
ReplyDeletethats nice...real nice..as in, seriously the thought and the message it gives is beautiful...
Regards,
The Silhouette...
Very Very Patriotic Massge! Sims! :)
ReplyDeletelovely thought and message...beautiful poem...:)
ReplyDeletewow!!...very nice yaar....now i am a real fan of your granny...she is too good...
ReplyDeletethe patriotic message is so thoughtful...nowadays it should be concerned...
and u know that I already had gave similar msg in my few poems...
plzzz give my love to ur granny and tell her she inspired me..
lovely poem by ur Granny all over again..:)
ReplyDeleteconvey my regards to her :)
Wishes,
Monu
Ateee Uttam! :)
ReplyDeleteLovely writing Simran,
ReplyDeleteeven in a loose translation the message shines through!
Bravo
<3
Crying With A Sense Of Human
Eon Heath,
ReplyDeleteThank You so much:)
I am very happy that you read my hindi post!
Keep Smiling
Mohu,
ReplyDeleteThank You! :)
Vaisakhi,
ReplyDeleteThanks, Glad that you liked it! :)
@Manpreet
ReplyDeleteShukriya :)
Hema di,
ReplyDeleteMy granny is so happy to listen this!
Her blessings are with you always...
She also conveyed her Love to you!:)
Take care
Monu Awalla
ReplyDeleteThank You so much :)
PsycheBubbles ,
ReplyDeleteDhanyavaad !:)
rivercat,
ReplyDeleteThanks :)
granny you are really wonderful, loved your poetry:))
ReplyDeletelittle princess, you are a lucky granddaughter of a versatile granny.
Patriotic Poem.. Applause to your GRANNY... A beautiful entry for the contest.. Wish you a very happy Friendship Day..
ReplyDeleteSomeone is Special
Grand Ma... I am not eligible to pen my words here.. "wordless"
ReplyDeleteSomeone is Special
@Sanchi,
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for such sweet words and appreciating my graany :)
@SIS,
Thank you so much..
Her blessings are with you all :)