आओ मिलकर सोचें हम हित अपने देश का ,
नारा सदा हमारा हो मानवता के सन्देश का ,
सभी धर्मो का सार एक है ,
खंडन करे हम भेद का ,
सत्कर्म हमारा धर्म हो ,
अभियुद्य करें परिवेश का ,
भटकी हुई मनुष्यता को हम रह दिखाएँ प्रेम का ,
रक्त सभी का एक है,
परिष्करण करें हम क्लेश का ,
जन मानस को जागृत कर ,
उद्धार करें हम देश का ,
आओ मिलकर सोचें हम हित अपने देश का
BY MY GRANNY - स्वर्ण कौर
Hey, Hi
ReplyDeletethats nice...real nice..as in, seriously the thought and the message it gives is beautiful...
Regards,
The Silhouette...
Very Very Patriotic Massge! Sims! :)
ReplyDeletelovely thought and message...beautiful poem...:)
ReplyDeletewow!!...very nice yaar....now i am a real fan of your granny...she is too good...
ReplyDeletethe patriotic message is so thoughtful...nowadays it should be concerned...
and u know that I already had gave similar msg in my few poems...
plzzz give my love to ur granny and tell her she inspired me..
lovely poem by ur Granny all over again..:)
ReplyDeleteconvey my regards to her :)
Wishes,
Monu
Ateee Uttam! :)
ReplyDeleteLovely writing Simran,
ReplyDeleteeven in a loose translation the message shines through!
Bravo
<3
Crying With A Sense Of Human
Eon Heath,
ReplyDeleteThank You so much:)
I am very happy that you read my hindi post!
Keep Smiling
Mohu,
ReplyDeleteThank You! :)
Vaisakhi,
ReplyDeleteThanks, Glad that you liked it! :)
@Manpreet
ReplyDeleteShukriya :)
Hema di,
ReplyDeleteMy granny is so happy to listen this!
Her blessings are with you always...
She also conveyed her Love to you!:)
Take care
Monu Awalla
ReplyDeleteThank You so much :)
PsycheBubbles ,
ReplyDeleteDhanyavaad !:)
rivercat,
ReplyDeleteThanks :)
granny you are really wonderful, loved your poetry:))
ReplyDeletelittle princess, you are a lucky granddaughter of a versatile granny.
Patriotic Poem.. Applause to your GRANNY... A beautiful entry for the contest.. Wish you a very happy Friendship Day..
ReplyDeleteSomeone is Special
Grand Ma... I am not eligible to pen my words here.. "wordless"
ReplyDeleteSomeone is Special
@Sanchi,
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for such sweet words and appreciating my graany :)
@SIS,
Thank you so much..
Her blessings are with you all :)