Tuesday, April 05, 2011

हित अपने देश का


आओ मिलकर सोचें  हम हित अपने देश का ,
नारा सदा हमारा हो मानवता के सन्देश का ,
सभी धर्मो का सार एक है ,
खंडन करे हम भेद का ,
सत्कर्म हमारा धर्म हो ,
अभियुद्य करें परिवेश का ,
भटकी हुई मनुष्यता को हम  रह दिखाएँ प्रेम का ,
रक्त सभी का एक है,
परिष्करण करें हम क्लेश का ,
जन मानस को जागृत कर ,
उद्धार करें हम देश का ,
आओ मिलकर सोचें हम हित अपने देश का 

BY MY GRANNY - स्वर्ण कौर 

20 comments:

  1. Hey, Hi
    thats nice...real nice..as in, seriously the thought and the message it gives is beautiful...

    Regards,
    The Silhouette...

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  2. Very Very Patriotic Massge! Sims! :)

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  3. lovely thought and message...beautiful poem...:)

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  4. बहुत ही अच्छा पोस्ट है ! मेरे लोग पर आये ! हवे अ गुड डे !
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  5. wow!!...very nice yaar....now i am a real fan of your granny...she is too good...

    the patriotic message is so thoughtful...nowadays it should be concerned...

    and u know that I already had gave similar msg in my few poems...

    plzzz give my love to ur granny and tell her she inspired me..

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  6. lovely poem by ur Granny all over again..:)
    convey my regards to her :)

    Wishes,
    Monu

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  7. Lovely writing Simran,
    even in a loose translation the message shines through!
    Bravo
    <3


    Crying With A Sense Of Human

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  8. Eon Heath,
    Thank You so much:)
    I am very happy that you read my hindi post!

    Keep Smiling

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  9. Vaisakhi,
    Thanks, Glad that you liked it! :)

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  10. Hema di,
    My granny is so happy to listen this!
    Her blessings are with you always...
    She also conveyed her Love to you!:)

    Take care

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  11. Monu Awalla
    Thank You so much :)

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  12. PsycheBubbles ,
    Dhanyavaad !:)

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  13. granny you are really wonderful, loved your poetry:))

    little princess, you are a lucky granddaughter of a versatile granny.

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  14. Patriotic Poem.. Applause to your GRANNY... A beautiful entry for the contest.. Wish you a very happy Friendship Day..

    Someone is Special

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  15. Grand Ma... I am not eligible to pen my words here.. "wordless"

    Someone is Special

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  16. @Sanchi,
    Thank you so much for such sweet words and appreciating my graany :)

    @SIS,
    Thank you so much..

    Her blessings are with you all :)

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~Simran