Thursday, April 09, 2015

Fading Away


Your enclosure 
right from my birth 
I merely a bud
You save me from 
surrounding dearth,
Within you I nurtured myself, 
A sudden caste away of yours 
rendered me into a new self,
You're still by my side, 
yet you let my efflorescence
 to be in the light,
you have been always 
a part of me, 
without you 
 I am incomplete 
with lost essence of 
life and glee
I am fading away,
With each wind's blow 
I sway.

Written for A to Z Challenge 

3 comments:

  1. Those last 3 lines. Wow Sims :) Ioved those.

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  2. I am feeling good
    With each post I read
    I enjoy your writing

    Like Leo said the last three lines is a big WOW

    Someone is Special

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  3. There's a certain rhythm to your words, nice!

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