Sunday, December 01, 2013

Love is you, Love is in the air

This post has been published by me as a part of the Blog-a-Ton 44; the forty-fourth edition of the online marathon of Bloggers; where we decide and we write. To be part of the next edition, visit and start following Blog-a-Ton


On that bright day every corner was enshroud with amber gleam sheath under the the cloudless sapphire sky, scorching heat that reminds you of  'Rime of the Ancient Mariner'. Everything was dull and dry. On such a searing day nobody could imagine even a blow of wind for split second  but Shanaya, a strong instinct believer already predicted , there would be rains shortly. 
No one cared! She quickly went into her kitchen to prepare a mug of coffee and some cookies for herself. Her younger brother started teasing her for her dippy act.
Hot coffee on a hot day!
Didi, have you got crazy? 

She wasn't paying attention towards him. She was calm,lost in the other world. Busy in blending cocoa and sugar. Again her brother in a teasing tone, Watching stars in day time?He pinched her tender pinkish skin. Who is he??
She came back to reality and smiled to herself and all of sudden got strict and serious when noticed her brother glaring at her in confusion.
Don't engage yourself among this and that, Prithvi, I tell you. Your exams are near go and study otherwise I'll tell papa, you sneak out secretly to play cricket in early morning.
Sorry didi, you are the greatest. Please forgive this poor child. She stared at him aggressively.
Am leaving di .... am leavin...
Within no time the sky was covered with dark heavy clouds. The yellow sphere welcomed them by giving them space to settle there. Cold harsh winds were blowing hard along with thunderstorm. Shanaya's prediction was again right!

 She believed '' things you truly love, you get attached to them deeply, sincerely, completely and then, distance or connection doesn't matter''
She entered into a dark room with a mug of coffee and cookies. Settled herself before the wide open window and played the radio set in a low volume. For her, it was a perfect delight. Also she was a passionate classical dancer. She opened her drawer to find gold anklets . Her mobile phone vibrated  and her favorite name was flashed on the screen, Rohan!
Her heartbeats were ranged high in excitement. It read as,
 '' My love Shanaya, I love our love dance in the loving rains. Am coming at our favorite spot within 3 minutes. Lets see who's more passionate''.
Shanaya quickly ran, she wanted to be there before him. Both of them reached together from opposite directions. Shanaya hugged Rohan tightly. Their heartbeats were fast and clearly audible to each other. Warmth of touch was pleasing among those chill raindrops.He held her more closer and murmured softly in her ear
 ''Love is in the air, feel it...let it touch you. You know, it touches you after touching me and ultimately my touch over you''
Am living the best moments of my life, Rohan. 
Rain was over. Everything looked fresh and washed. The sun again appeared but this time with light warmth to set down with ignition of Shanaya and Rohan's love.

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Credits
Image - Love in the air by Anand
Courtesy - Apple Blossom's Photography via www.blogaton.in

33 comments:

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    1. So happy you found it beautiful. Thank you so much Sri :-)

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  2. Good attempt...very much tune with the prompt pic.

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    1. Welcome Jini to My Friendship.

      Glad I did well with the prompt. Thanks a lot, Jini
      Do visit again..

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  3. खूबसूरत भाव खूबसूरत रचना

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    1. Aapki pratikriya se mujhe ati prasannta hui. Dhanyawad

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  4. Loved the rain-dance,, Simran. Beautiful love-story..enjoyed reading :))

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    1. Pleased to know you liked it,Mam
      Thank you s much.. :)

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  5. The fact I love the most about this post of yours is that I has the perfect proportion details every character and scenario requires, and the fact that you have chosen to write about the romantic mode of beautiful rains and have geniusly slided away from its gloomy part.
    It is rare that you write romantic stories, I love it :)
    Your post is the first one I read after my long come back to blogger and I am very much pleased with your writing :)
    Keep writing, your talent is limitless! I believe it :)
    Stay blessed <3

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    1. Am always excited to read your comment in detail...I love them <3
      Yes, its been so long since have wrote something romantic... There is a reason too.
      Happy it pleased you..
      Love you so much sisy...ur words make me fly and make me feel confident about my capabilities.

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  6. Wonderful post Simran... you have justified the the title very well...!
    Though I couldn't write this time
    ATB for BAT :-)

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    1. After writing many unsatisfied post and writer's block finally something better and new has come from my pen. That's something great and happy for me.. :-)
      Thanks a lot for the wishes!
      Please do participate next time.

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  7. So beautiful dear, so engaging and pure. True love is truly eternal, it knows no boundaries and it needs no connections except for the soul. And you brought it out so wonderfully well through your piece, I loved reading it. Keep writing, dear -- you are god-gifted and talented with that pen in your hand. Wish you best. :)

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    1. Welcome Arti Dear,
      You are one of most awaiting readers here. Glad you loved it! :-)
      The talent only grows when it receives appreciation and true views... I'm blessed my talent is getting exposed at the right place among talented people.

      Thank you so much for the wishes.

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  8. Well written piece.
    Keep writing
    Keep inform
    Best
    Philip Ariel

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    1. Glad you liked it. Thanks P V ....Do visit again :)

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  9. love it! Love the theme for i am a romance writer myself. beautifully and skillfully created! a true talent Simran. Keep writing!

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    1. Thank you so much dear Hope :)
      Happy to read your words...

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  10. Sweet, romantic and full of love <3 Lovely write Simi!

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  11. at once you find nothing much in the post but then there is everything filled with love,nicely written

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  12. What a beautiful story little one! I loved each and every word penned here. To pick a few, first is the conversation between Shanaya and Prithivi.. Too good, and I have experienced that :) Roshan is too romantic and your words too :)

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    1. Little one, I have tagged you here for a BlogAdda's contest. Please accept the tag and let me know your response.

      Someone is Special

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    2. Thanks a lot for the tag :)

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    1. Thank you so much for the read, Sir!
      happy you liked it .

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  14. Loved the tender romance :) Nice

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  15. Lovely ! You do have a way with words :)

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~Simran