Monday, August 05, 2013

Make A Wish



This post has been published by me as a part of the Blog-a-Ton 40; the fortieth edition of the online marathon of Bloggers; where we decide and we write. To be part of the next edition, visit and start following Blog-a-Ton. The theme for the month is "MAKE A WISH"


With this melting candle wax she discovered her life smelting into cessation which was of iniquity since when he came into her life. His deceitful love which had a day life and it died! She's true and fragile from heart yet an oath she takes 'Tit for Tat' a wish 'Almighty please don't lemme break'

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    1. Sorry, because of less time I did post without my actual contest. You may read it now :-)

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  2. Let the almighty be with her... Liked your post little one....

    Someone is Special

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    1. Special One liked my post ...Wow!! :D
      There is my win :-)

      Thank you!
      :-)

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    1. Glad it left you with fascination :-)
      Thanks, Asteria !

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  4. Betrayal lead to strong emotions .. and you have captured them very efficiently in just 55 words !
    very well done dear ..
    let the good work keep coming ! :D:D

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    1. True.. :)
      Glad you liked it!
      Thanks dear

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  5. a women can be as strong as wishes to be....nice 55er.....though 'tit for tat' is not something i feel strongly about.

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    1. That's true :-)
      I honor your views dear...Thank you, Little princess! :-)

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  6. Tit for tat never works.. for the person who 'knows' what pain is, never wants another to see that 'pain'. At least for me ...

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    1. 'the person who 'knows' what pain is, never wants another to see that 'pain'.'

      Absolutely true!
      But what about the person who intentionally hurt you and play with your emotions??
      Is it right to curse yourself or to make the Casanova realize??

      Still I welcome your views with honor..
      Thank you dear

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  7. Tit for tat never works.. for the person who 'knows' what pain is, never wants another to see that 'pain'. At least for me.

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    1. 'the person who 'knows' what pain is, never wants another to see that 'pain'.'

      Absolutely true!
      But what about the person who intentionally hurt you and play with your emotions??
      Is it right to curse yourself or to make the Casanova realize??

      Still I welcome your views with honor..
      Thank you dear

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  8. Hey Sims, I don't know what to say here, you left me speechless...One of my very good friend is kind of in the same state, and when I was reading this, I was actually feeling her pain. Excellent job sweet heart, very amiable post for me. :)

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    1. That's really sad to know dear...
      Hope the guy realize his mistake someday and may repent for the whole life for loosing the true love.

      My God bless strength to your friend. Please tell her not to stop living her life..its short then why to make it lost??

      Thanks dear...
      Happy it left u speechless :-)

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  9. It will require strength to do "tit for tat" with one she fell in love with.
    May she be that strong :)
    Beautiful.

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    1. Yes dearie, a lot of!
      Thank you :-) :-)

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  10. hurt, betrayal, strength, revenge...you captured it all... nice one :)
    All the Best for BAT :)

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    1. Welcome to M.F, Rhythm

      Glad you liked it :-)
      Thank you so much!

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  11. Oh I felt the pain, Simran. The emotions are too strong that even the victim of deceit wants revenge. Good job! :-)

    ~Irene
    In A Different Place

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    1. You felt my words exactly... thank you so much, Irene :)

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    1. :-)
      Damn happy to impress you :D
      Thanks!

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  13. Simple and Sweet. The melted wax is mirrored with the women's heart. A true 55ier..Good one
    - Vajra

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    1. Bingo!
      You pointed it exactly! :D
      Thanks for stopping by, Vajra.

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  14. That was imapactful, baby. A few words could do magic...ATB!!!:)

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    1. Happy to have you here, Panchali ji :-)

      That's true..Words have mystic magic :D
      Thank you so much for the wishes!
      Best wishes to u too.

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  15. छोटी पर सटीक और सुन्दर रचना

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    1. Aapko meri rachna pasad aai..hardik prasannta hui..
      tahedil se dhanyawaad.

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  16. This 55er is an excellent portrayal of betrayal, vindictive-urge, strength-seeking-wish and dormant-hurt. Beautiful composition.

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  17. concise but said too much about the people,situation and story,very well written

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    1. Thank you so much for stopping by Cifar :-)

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~Simran