Wednesday, August 07, 2013

Dreams


To be an inspiration for someone, 
the feeling is so special and satisfying.
 I am happy to share the very first poem 'Dreams' written by one of my dear friend and a classmate of mine, Saumya.I'll keep sharing her poems here so as to encourage her and make her confident about her writings. I hope you all would enjoy reading the two little poets all together :-)


For some people
it may come and go 
But for some
Its like the supernova
which becomes brighter and brighter
For them,
Day and Night comes and go.
But the mightiest beauty which can't be ever compromised...
ARE DREAMS,THEIR DREAMS.

All the other things supersede and are speculated by them
but the beauty,which can't be ever compromised
of their life...
ARE DREAMS ,THEIR DREAMS.

The willingness,The confidence,
Their intellect,
all seems to b mad,
To achieve,To grab,
the loveliest thing.
the beauty which can't be ever compromised..
ARE DREAMS, THEIR DREAMS.

Many of the capricious situations
Comes and go,
But the madness of achieving the goal
should not be decreased,
It should be on the top,
that i can beat anything
to achieve,
THE DREAMS,MY DREAMS...


To Saumya,
Congratulations for writing your first poetry, the most special :)
Writing is such a relation once you made you'd find it as a reason for you to live. The best companion ever and most importantly it belongs to you! There are many more to come and I believe there would be the wonders one each time.
Wish you all the best for your poetic journey.

-Simran

14 comments:

  1. you're a great friend Simran!!
    The poem is great :)

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    1. thank you so much. for being such great friend.. simi. :-)

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    2. thank you so much. for being such great friend.. simi. :-)

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  2. I wish all her dreams come true! She holds confidence, which is obvious in her poem. Keep it up Saumya :) You got a great fiend to hold you up... if you try more, you could beat her easily. Lol Just kidding dear. You are unique and special, Simran :)

    Best wishes to both of you!

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    1. Even I am amaze to see her level of confidence in her very first poem.. Thank you so much for the wishes.I'll covey your words to Saumya it would inspire her more.

      Hahah..Even I told her the same :-)
      That's sweet of you...thanks!

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    2. Thank you for being such great friend simi.. and helping me on every step.. :-)

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  3. Very beautiful, it doesn't look like first poem...natural expression. You are inspiring indeed and a real best friend too.

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    1. Yeah, she is going great with her poems.... :)
      thank you for inspiring Saumya !

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    2. thank you so much for appreciating me for doing much more better.. Thank you.. that really means a lot to me..

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  4. ur classmate is very talented simi....and u are an amazing friend..:)

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  5. I adore your poem i feel deep from the heart i feel inspired when i read it.
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Either positive or negative comments are good because it shows I am still relevant. Hope you enjoyed reading here:-) !!
~Simran