Friday, May 31, 2013

In this serene rain



No matter how much the things go wrong to me

No matter how depress I feel or lost

A touch of cool wind I perceive in silence

Ventilate my heart accumulated with

Uncountable worries & unexplained feelings

I close my eyes as to feel each and every drop of

This serene rain, my own spiritual believe

That touches me; the feeling of lost evades in silence

No more solitary, Nature accompanies me to consort

And that too with ''Loyalty''.


8 comments:

  1. I love the ending more "that too with loyalty"
    So perfect with words Simran, one day I wish to rhyme as fluently as you do.

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    1. I am happy, you got it exactly what I wanted to convey through the single word Loyalty...
      Thanks for the appreciation, I'm flying :D

      You already rhyme so beautiful dear ..even better than me :)

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    1. :-) :-)
      Thank you!
      My best wishes to you..

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  3. Hii Simran... beautiful blog u hv!!and I am amazed 2 find sm1 who share similar thot process like I do...

    N nature is the best friend one cn have.... a loyal one indeed!

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    1. Welcome to My Friendship, Satya

      Hi,
      I was waiting from so long for you visit :-)
      Glad we have something in common...Yes, nature will be always the loyal one than this fake world and its ppl!

      I am reallyyyy happy to receive your comment...
      Thank u so much
      Stay Smiling & Happy Blogging

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  4. Yes it comes with loyalty.. :)

    Someone is Special

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    1. Its deep here. I hope you got that :)

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