Monday, April 15, 2013

Speculate




Numbness revive when the door flux by the wind
I give it a mythical constant glare as if it has something
 to say; In my mind what goes on-
   '' थिरकन  ये  होती  जो हलचल 
   आहट ये  होती जो  आवाज़ 
    तन्हाई को मिल जाता कोई साथी 
   ख़तम होता ये इंतज़ार ''
These few lines of my poetry ruined my fate into exactly 
A touch of musty across, I perceive that rupture my inner self
Shake up my consciousness till I get back to reverie 
My initial stage where aggression remains unrelenting   
A battle in my heart and mind ; he left me in sole!
Does that mean he has changed his goal that once belonged to me?
Will I be remain in solitary, deceived as yesterday I was? 
The inner me that roar- 
''Since the beginning it was only and only You
 Your life is as empty as it was; It may remain
 If today you don't get your eyes open to reality
 The world has changed and so its people, not you
 Get change because there is nothing to wait
 There was there is and there will be always
 the God for you; no one else
Love him for he love you the most
He would never ever leave you alone!''

P.S.- Many of you can relate to this, I need not explain ...


20 comments:

  1. I guess everyone can relate to this ... for that feeling of love is present in all ... beautiful piece, and those Hindi lines added to the essence !!!

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    1. I'm so happy to see how exactly you got the sense in my poetry :)
      And do you know...You are my favorite reader :D
      Hmm...Hindi lines.. just my little attempt. Glad you liked.
      Thank you so much.

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    2. Favorite reader :-) Wow, thanks a lot ma'am :D

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  2. Excellent !
    Very well written :)

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    1. I am flying to have such a great compliment from you, Shobha ji
      Thank you so much :)

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  3. Beautiful one..just like you Simmy.. Keep writing more

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    1. Awww :)
      How sweet! Thanks Snehu :)

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  4. hey i can relate this... very nice... thanks for sharing...
    keep writing.. keep sharing... :):)

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  5. very true i agree with u 100% none but God ll be there to hear u all the time. GBU :)

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    1. Happy to see you Sowmya after a long time. Welcome back :D
      Glad you agree! Thank you so much for the wishes... you made my Birthday more special by visiting my blog. Thank you so much Dear! :)

      Best wishes to u as well ...

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  6. "There was there is and there will be always
    the God for you; no one else
    Love him for he love you the most
    He would never ever leave you alone!''

    This is my favorite line. :) Guess this is a good call for me to go to church and pray. :)

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  7. Beautiful and so intense, Sim! I am so proud of you my dear.Your thoughts took me to the world of depth and in various perspectives.Specially,when you challenge yourself.Fighting with fragile emotions then venting out through words can really heal the whole world.Bravo! and HAPPY BIRTHDAY,Poetess!

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  8. Beautiful and so intense, Sim! I am so proud of you my dear.Your thoughts took me to the world of depth and in various perspectives.Specially,when you challenge yourself.Fighting with fragile emotions then venting out through words can really heal the whole world.Bravo! and HAPPY BIRTHDAY,Poetess!

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  9. beautiful simi...and seriously guess everyone can relate to this...i liked the hindi lines..and loved these lines...
    A touch of musty across, I perceive that rupture my inner self
    Shake up my consciousness till I get back to reverie
    My initial stage where aggression remains unrelenting
    A battle in my heart and mind ; he left me in sole!...:)

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  10. Yes, I can relate this. It's beautiful! :)
    Welcome! :)

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  11. Well Written! I am not much of a believer but could relate to the angst of finding a meaning to the seemingly endless drama called life.

    -Abhijit (Reflections )

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  12. sweetly penned down my dear... :)

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  13. I am astonish to read such painful emotions in your words Simran!
    This is new and it is definitely a work well done!
    P.S. I hope you aren't sad dear? Please don't :(

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