Monday, April 01, 2013

Haiku : Ascent


World illuminates
with the preen light of Sun rise
evading darkness 


When I find a bird 
soaring high in the wide sky
sigh! my life, a cage


April A2Z Heights - Day 01 - Ascent

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    1. Happy to have your words, Pranita...thanks :)

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  2. Simple and significant! Enjoyed both the poems, Simran :)

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    1. Glad you enjoyed the read :)
      Thank you so much!

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  3. The second one took my heart for a flight..

    RS

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    1. Appreciation from you is really something great! :)
      Thank you so much...

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  4. the second one.. intense!! I hope you will one day realize you have wings too and that you too can fly.. you made your haiku fly, you sure can fly yourself. All the best. :)
    Ascent.

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  5. I remembered the book "The Notebook" saying I want to be a bird.
    Nice Haiku. :)

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    1. Happy to see you following my blog!
      Thanks,Ajay! :)

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  7. Comparison with a bird ... now that's real beauty !!!

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