Monday, October 29, 2012

Speculations and Contrasts



The more you wait; the more it gets late
The more expect; the more it hurts you exact
The more you try to make; the more situations tend to break
The more you find reasons; the more you get in confusion
The more you try to show; the more you get outshone
The more you have; the more things you have to loose
The more you dare; the more you bear

But


The more you share; the more you cheer
The more you love; the more you be loved
The more you try; the more things come by
The more imagine; the more your thoughts be designed 
The more you believe within; the more stronger even the fate tries to make you win
The more challenges you accept; the more opportunities your way precept
The more you be true; the more you be You!


P.S.- I wrote this as a fun scribble but soon realized worth to share with you all. I would love to read yours ''the more...''

49 comments:

  1. @Simran --> this is really too good. .! very well written, depicting the anarchy of life

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    1. Glad you liked it :)
      Thank you so much, Sulaiman

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  2. I loved the beautiful thoughts in this piece ... a really matured writing :-)

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    1. I waits eagerly to know your views .. :)
      Glad you liked it! Thank you so much, Amrit

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  3. Nice style of writing.
    Good work. :)

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    1. Thanks Vinay!
      Just tried something..glad you liked it!

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  4. You are a little girl but you have so much in your little mind to share and what a good heart Simran..

    I ma glad you shared this with us, it is so very true what you have written and that too in such simple words ...

    very true any second is time to change ..

    God bless you little one .. take care

    Bikram's

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    1. I am so happyyyyyyyyy to receive such a beautiful comment from my Bikram dear :)
      I am delighted that you liked it and realized my words so deeply. Thank you so much for your constant support. I am blessed having such a dear one as you :)

      Take care !

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  5. Wonderful writing! Its true that sometimes the more we try the farther we get from our goal, but it also brings about opportunities.

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    1. Jillien,

      I agree to what you said ..
      Thank you so much for stopping by! Hope to see you again :)

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  6. How truly written Simran! Each phrase simply conjoins worth and significant.
    Keep it up :)

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    1. Glad to know that dear :)
      Thank you so much!!

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  7. too sad that some times, the more we share, the more negative people become.

    love your positive take on life.

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    1. Thanks, Terri!
      Glad to have you at My Friendship! :)

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  8. Actually you have written the facts....but then very poetically :) Good job
    Keep writing

    Cheers,
    Dawn

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    1. Thank you so much, Dawn...Happy to read your words :)

      Wish you a Happy Writing too!

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  9. for sure, tis is not just fun but more inspirational...
    thanks for sharing...

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    1. Well you can call it as an inspirational scribble :)
      Thanks, Deeps :)

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    1. Glad you found it powerful, Aya :)
      Thanks a lot!

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  11. A very matured one! I must say that when one put her heart more, the more she gets followed. This one has really touched me! Beautiful piece! :)

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    1. The compliment of maturity makes me happy and confident! Thanks dear :)
      Happppyyy me! you felt my words so deeply! :)
      Thanks a lot dear!

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  12. elegant...

    the way you flirt with words is amazing.

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  13. Touching words nicely spun together :)

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    1. Meoww,
      Glad to have you dear :)
      Thank you so much!

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  14. good one ...lovely presentation :)
    liked the front image of my friendship ....you a beautiful blog dear!!

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    1. Firstly, I wanna thank you Anu from the bottom of my heart for your constant support and love! I feel blessed:)

      Happy u liked it!
      Wow! You noticed the header image! Glad :)
      Thank you so much dear.

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  15. agree.

    masterful words to show that love does magic.

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    1. Helen,
      Love is magical :)
      Thank you so much..

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  16. Really awesome lines Simi!...esp loved this line..."The more you believe within; the more stronger even the fate tries to make you win"

    B.t.w....How r u?...Hope you are doing well...Missing you!

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    1. Valli dear,
      I am sooo happyyy you loved it! :)
      Cheers!

      I am doing great dear..How's ya? Awww :(

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    2. I'm good too dear :)
      Hope to see you soon!
      take care :)

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  17. beautiful blog theme. these falling balls are really lovely

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    1. Happy you liked blog's theme :)
      Thanks

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  18. well written, great thoughts

    happy Diwali !!!

    thanks

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    1. Glad you liked! Thanks :)
      Happy Diwali to you too :) :)

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  19. dearie..this is the first time I'm leaving comment on your blog...
    Its great and thought-provoking post that everyone should realise...all the lines that you have mentioned....

    good attempt and great writing dear... :)

    keep blogging...wish you good luck..

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    1. Hearty Welcome to My Friendship, Madhavi :)

      Happy reading your appreciation. Thank you so much. Hope to receive your constant support :)

      Good luck to u too!

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  20. Can I copy this?
    In my diary please?

    Ah!! I have missed this place :)
    How are you my dear friend?

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    1. How sweeet of you!
      Ya sure you can copy this in your diary :-)

      Missed ya too..
      I am good. How are you?

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    2. Thank you :)
      Well are you having your exams too?
      I just went through the disaster :P
      Oh AND SORRY I had to mail you, I am doing it right now :)

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    3. Yes dear I am going to have a disastrous series of exams from 14th till 29th :( :P
      How was your exam? All the best for the result... May you come up with flying colors :) :)

      Yes yes .. I am waiting eagerly from so long to receive your mail :)

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  21. The more I read you; the more I adore reading!

    Thanks little one for this beautiful one..

    Someone is Special

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    1. I am flying! :)
      The more you appreciate me the more I get inspired.
      Thanks a lot :-)

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Either positive or negative comments are good because it shows I am still relevant. Hope you enjoyed reading here:-) !!
~Simran