Tuesday, October 23, 2012

Momentary Escape


Rushing her loitering steps
breaking the walls of Qualm
for today she comprehended 
the verity of Life ; Momentary Escape
getting abscond by each passing flash
of nothing but lingering memories that would remain
stressed her soul and mind being nostalgic 
when clashed to her obscure reverie 
an air of vigilance awaken her 
with a little message, worth for a life 
''Life is short then why to make it lost?''

Written for- Bluebell Books
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Rain : Music
Friendship : God's Gift
Blogging : Writings
Morning : New Start
Teddies : Cute
Black : dark
Pillow : sound sleep
Cricket : excitement
Fashion : Bore
Winter : Shiver

Written for Word-O-Logy at Coveted Dreams



50 comments:

  1. Excellent poetry :) Thanks for participating in the Word-O-Logy dear Simran :) You are such a talented sweet dear I tell you ! :) Glad to have a friend like you ! Take care :)

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    1. I always have excitement to read your comments.. Glad you liked :)
      Word-O-Logy is such a fun game. I'm loving it! :)
      Cheers for our Amity! Thank you so much
      Lots of Love and Care..

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  2. An innocent escape I guess :)Cute message brought to notice. Live your life as if it's the last, such detailing in few lines. You are an expert poet. A cognitive perspective!

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    1. Yes, you can perfectly call it as an Innocent Escape.This composition is inter- related to many things.We can discuss in detail, personally if you like :)
      Thank you so much for blessing me with such beautiful compliments. They makes my day! :) :)

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  3. The poetry is beautiful as always --- you bring out strong meanings in each of your work ... well done !!!

    PS: I too am participating in Word-o-Logy. Nice choice of words :-)

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    1. Glad reading your words, Amrit :)
      Thank you so much buddy!

      I've checked yours.. Lovely attempt! :D

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  4. Beautiful poetry, dear Simran...!Somehow I flowed with the lines...:))
    The words you chose for playing the game were meaningful and appropriate..:))Well done!

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    1. I am so happpyyyyyyyy to have you here, Dear Panchali! :)
      You writes wonder, I must say! :) :)
      So happy you liked and felt my words deeply. And I read yours.. Lovely played :)

      Cheers!

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  5. oh yes Live each moment as it will be last .. LIFE is short and it is running away fastttttttttttttttttttt


    beautiful lines simran :)

    Bikram's

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    1. ''Apna har pal aise jiyo, jaise ki aakhri ho..'' :)
      I agree, everyone should have the same attitude towards their life!

      Ahaaa, I see Bikram your words getting poetic :)
      Thank you so much !!

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  6. poem with a message, hmmmm...... ;) keep going!

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  7. this is very enjoyable.

    colorful and stunning poetry.

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    1. Happy you enjoyed my words, Janet!
      Thank you so much for stopping by..

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  8. Beautiful write up with emphasis! Life is short and let it be sweet for you and all :)

    Best wishes dear

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    1. Sure :)

      Best wishes to you too dear :)

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  9. escaping from reality for a short break is cool.
    love the dynamic imagery in your words.

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    1. Glad you loved the theme :)
      Thanks, Hillary!

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  11. your blog is wonderful, the background music is fun,
    your poem is well done.

    cheers.

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    1. Happy you liked the blog, music and the poem :) :)
      Thanks a lot, Ihop!

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    1. Glad reading your words, Dear Aya :)
      Thank you so much.

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    1. Welcome to My Friendship, Vinay!

      Glad you found it beautiful :)
      Thank you so much.

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  14. there is a touch of philosophy in all ur poems

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    1. Now that's a huge compliment for me! Thank you so much Deeps :) :)

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  15. My family members every time say that I am killing my time here at net, however I know I am getting know-how every day by reading such nice posts. From Harry

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    1. Glad you find my writings reading worth! :)
      Thank you so much...

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    1. Welcome to My Friendship, Gunjan
      Glad you cherished my words :)
      Thank you so much. Keep stopping by!

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  17. Nice positive write. Keep on writing poems...

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    1. Welcome To My Friendship, Bijyaylaxmi

      Glad having you here. thanks for dropping by :)

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  18. I loved your poem!! Its amazingly lyrical...thanks for dropping by my blog :) Am your 170th Follower :)
    Dreams n Drama

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    1. Welcome to My Friendship, Swarnali!

      I am delighted to know that you liked the composition :)
      Excited to have you my friend... Hope to receive your constant support!
      Lots of Love!
      Happy Blogging to you...

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  19. Nice poem!

    And liked the word association. They're somewhat, no, totally, realistic. I like that thing! :)

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  20. the arranged words as poetry are awesome.. keep up the same spirit throught.. :)

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    1. Welcome to My Friendship, Sravanth

      Thank you so much for such sweet words :)
      Keep dropping by!

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  21. Life is short.. Very beautifully written :) :) :)

    Someone is Special

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    1. @Special One

      I am super glad you found it beautiful .. :)
      SmileS

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Either positive or negative comments are good because it shows I am still relevant. Hope you enjoyed reading here:-) !!
~Simran