Saturday, September 29, 2012

Cogitation


Aesthetic curlicue in colors 
flourished on this cosmos certain boundaries with contour
disseminate the charm; the nature's flair
an everlasting state of the art endowed we eulogize 
but at the same time we denounce its sway of reign
sometimes because of faux pas 
or because of avarice!
We dwell in this then why so detached ?

  

40 comments:

  1. such beautiful use of words, Simran! Bravo for your beautiful thoughts! :)

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    1. Happy to have you back Pallavi :)
      Thank you so much for compliments ...they inspire me express more and more.

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  2. Beautiful composition with deep thoughts of odor! Well written Simran.

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    1. Glad to know you felt beauty and odor my words :)
      Its always my pleasure to have such a Wonderful blogger and a reader..Thank you so much dear :)

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  3. so much you said in these few words Simran...

    Wonderful words....:)

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    1. Glad to have you here... Welcome! :)

      Words are always strong when used aptly.. Happy I did ! :)
      Thank you so much...

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  4. Very thoughtful writing Simi!...I loved the ending question...So powerful!

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    1. That question is for sensitive people towards the natural nature like you , Valli :)

      Cheers! you liked you found it Powerful :)
      Thanks!

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  5. Every piece of poetry from your side that I come across is immensely beautiful. Such a mature outlook to issues is rare to find these days. Take care little angel.


    Love
    Tanya

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    1. And I am glad to receive such sweet and appreciating comments from you :)
      Thank you so much!

      Care and Love!

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  6. It's beautifully written with beautiful words!

    But....I got baffled to get your words with your first 3 lines.I think if they would have been segregated into 2 lines:
    "aesthetic curlicue in colors flourished on this cosmos
    certain boundaries with contour disseminate the charm;......"

    then, it would be more lovely!
    Hope,you don't mind!
    :)

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    1. I won't mind but appreciate your suggestion.. I think I should go for the change you suggested :)

      Thanks a lot!

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  7. Lovely explored the beauty in words dear Simran :)
    The photo is bewitching... Thanks so much for the visit and comment.

    Hugs n Kisses

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    1. Glad you liked my exploration and found this piece of poetry beautiful! :)
      Thanks, Shilpa

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  8. We are too busy to appreciate nature around us, isnt it?

    www.anucreations.blogspot.in
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    1. Welcome to My Friendship , Anupama

      We are actually!
      Thanks for stopping by :)

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    1. Welcome to My Friendship, deeps

      Well if you are comparing it with life than I would like to have your thoughts in explanation..
      Thanks for the visit :)

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  10. I have read a few good stuff here. Superb message, I seriously count on updates from you. From India

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    1. Welcome to My Friendship, Always Unlucky (Well I guess, that Isn't true)

      Glad you liked the message I conveyed here. Thanks

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  11. beautiful poem
    your template looks beautiful

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  12. Little one that was awesome.. I loved it :)

    Someone is Special

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    1. Glad you loved it :)
      Happyyyyyy
      Thanks a lot!

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  13. Beautiful words Simran :)
    So, is the seasonal shift inspiration behind this post? :)

    Regards

    Jay
    http://road-to-sanitarium.blogspot.in/

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    1. Welcome to My Friendship, Jay

      Glad you liked and found it beautiful. Well, truly that's an attachment to nature that inspired me.
      Thanks a lot for such encouraging words ! :)

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    1. Thanks Vinisha :)
      keep visiting! :)

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~Simran