Tuesday, July 10, 2012

The Key Of My Heart


No matter how far you are to me
you are in my heart!
A sacred place 
where my secrets lay
hidden in verses and tunes
locked deep within
You have that key esoterically
From the time
when you played 
those tunes of love for me lastly


everyday I engrave those 
musical tunes on sand
In a hope to see them ameliorated by you
But all I see
them vanished away with 
the shrieking waves rush
erasing evidence of my love and patience 
Still I believe to see
one already engraved set of tunes 
before I come the next day
In search of
The Key Of My Heart.

30 comments:

  1. hmmmmm but intodays day and age is it a good thing to hand over the key of your heart to anyone :) jsut a thought

    a beautiful poem simran .. take care

    Bikram's

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    1. It's not that secure in today's time but you know ...love when happens... it seems boundless of anything!
      I do agree with what you said! thank you so much for sharing your thought. Worth to keep in mind in today's era.

      Glad you felt poetry beautiful :)
      You too take care!

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  2. Beautifully engraved poem, Simran! Hope someone play a beautiful song using your heart strings :)

    Loved the poem and cute pictures!
    Best wishes

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    1. I hope the same...Wish it comes true ! :)
      Thank you so much !!

      Best wishes to you...
      Take care!

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  3. poetic words rhyming my heart & here I go.. :)

    Weakest LInk

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    1. Happy to have you here Rachit!
      Welcome Back! :)

      Rhyming heart! Wow! Expecting a poetry from your side too...
      Thank you so much...
      Will be back to Weakest Link soon... :)

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  4. so just think twice before moving ahead, thats what Bikram wants to say you perhaps......:))

    As usual beautiful flow of words here by you Simran....

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    1. I agree!
      Glad to have your appreciating words.
      Thank you so much.

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    1. Welcome to My Friendship, Rahul!

      Happy you liked! Thank you so much :)
      Hope to have you here again...

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  6. You seem to have found the key to heart, Simran:) Lovely poem!

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    1. Hmm...Not yet Rahul ji!
      Thank you so much...having you here is my pleasure! :)

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  7. hmmmm.....it seems you are deeply in love with someone ;)

    this poem expresses your inherent feelings.

    beautifully quoted!

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    1. In love...
      Hmm..nopes! I'm in love with myself! ;)
      Thank you so for encouraging me.
      Love to see you here!

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  8. I love what you wrote little one...this is me ;)

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    1. Thank you so much . sm! :)
      happy to have you here...

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  10. Simran...dear this one was WOW(n times)...superb... :)

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  11. SPECTACULAR! So much polishing in ur writing...this one ws frm SOUL...MWAAH!

    LOVE U MY CUTE BUNNY!

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    1. Awww... :)
      Happyyyy to read your appreciating words!!
      Yeyyyyyy :)
      Thank you so much!

      Love u too sweets :*

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  12. this a lovely rhyme indeed!
    keep going on simran dear :):):)

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    1. Thanks ashzzes!! :):)
      Your presence makes me happy!

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  13. Where did my comment go?? Beautiful take..!

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    1. Strange!! :(

      Glad you felt it beautiful!
      Thanks Special One :)

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~Simran