Saturday, July 28, 2012

Forget- Me - Not


Being with you gives me
immense pleasure and bliss
dear, forget -me -not

Written for Haiku Heights

40 comments:

  1. what this haiku heights is??????

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    1. Hi gayatri,
      Haiku Heights is blog about ''Haiku'' - A Japanese form of writing poetry that has 5-7-5 syllable. (Google about it)

      At Haiku Heights every Saturday we are given a prompt to write over.There are many other bloggers take part, appreciate with comments. Its fun..you must try it gayatri :)
      Hope to see you writing Haiku..and if you need any help regarding writing Haiku then do contact me. :)

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    1. Thank you :) :)
      Happy to see you here...

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  3. Simran, this is a really cute poem. It speaks of love, whether first or last or any. Nice write!

    Just a suggestion: Your haiku has more than 17 syllables. Maybe you could rewrite the same beautiful poem? :)

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    1. Happy you liked and found it cute ,Vaishali! Thanks
      Hmmm... maybe!
      that's a great idea, Vaishali! I think I should go for it. Will try to elaborate and shape it into a long poem :)

      thanks for the suggestion. I appreciate. Hope to see you again :)

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    2. Anytime, my friend! Glad to be of some help! :)

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    3. :) :)
      Happy to have you in this beautiful journey of Friendship!
      Stay Smiling Buddy! :D

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    1. :) :) thanks irene :)
      Love to see you here ... <3

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    1. Thank you so much Grace :)
      Happy to see you after a long time.

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  6. Straight from heart!!
    Simple and sweet haiku Simi..

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    1. yep! words purely from my heart :D
      Happy you liked ,Valli! Thanks

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  7. lovely romantic senyru ~~ thanks, namaste, (A Creative Harbor)

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    1. Welcome to My Friendship, ArtMuseDog and Carol

      Namaste, Happy you liked :)
      Thank you so much for stopping by and for the comment.

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    1. Welcome to My Friendship, joanne :)

      Happy to read your words. Thanks !

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  9. I love it! So sweet..:) And I find you really sweet Simran..:) Keep sharing dear,:) God bless..:)

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    1. Happy you love it! :)
      Aww :) you finds me sweet! I tell you, I am ;) :D Thank you so much dear.

      Pleasure to a fine creative blogger :)
      Thanks...best wishes to you buddy!

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  10. its a lovely take on the topic dear :)
    keep going on :)

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    1. Was missing your words and finally received! Happy me..thanks ashzzes!
      Wish you the same :)

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  11. Awe.... Sweeeeeeeeeeettttttttttt!!!!!!!! :D
    Tell you what, mere presence matter even if the person isn't aware of your existence but still when they're around it matters!

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    1. :) :)
      Exactly! I agree :)
      Their little presence, words and attention means a lot! (Special feeling being around Dear,Special Ones)
      Heart fears to loose them and urges...forget me not! :)
      P.S.- I always say to my dears...listen its not easy to forget me! But still I say..forget me not.( In a warning tone) LOL! ;) :D

      Happy to read your words :)
      Stay Smiling !

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    2. LOL :D
      Indeed. I can imagine the scene because I used to tell something similar to my best friend back in school. Used to say, " You will get busy enough not to think of me everyday but whenever I am going to cross your mind you'll be lost for hours" :P :D

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    3. That's sweet :) :)

      Thanks for sharing yours...Happy to read :)

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  12. Loved ones have that divine power

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    1. Welcome to My Friendship , Locomente

      True :)
      Thank you so much for stopping by...Wish to see you here again! :)
      Happy Blogging.

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  13. Romantic, but the use of the phrase "forget-me-not" could have been more pronounced. It gets a beautiful effect, but somewhere, something I felt lacking.

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    1. Thank you so much for sharing your views, Dearo! :)

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  14. Concise but direct ;) Loved it!

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    1. happy you loved it!
      thank you so much :)

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  15. Hmmm... Someone is so romantic... :)

    Someone is Special

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~Simran