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Haiku: Fate!



Capricious the fate 
over-rule at who depends  
upon, get rid of!

Written for the  Leo's ''Haiku Heights'' To visit Haiku Heights click on the image below :)

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  1. dont get it .. Told you i ma very dumb.. you need to explain me sorrry

    Bikram's

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    1. Na na ..You are not dumb at all my dear..
      Glad you asked for the explanation :)
      I want to convey that few people depends upon fate in-spite of believing in themselves...they hope for the blessings of fate! that is useless and lead on steps back!
      Never let fate rule on you..Give your fullest whatever you do.

      :)

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  2. It was an amazing stuff Simran...brilliant...:)

    Frankly speaking...at first it took me a moment to take in...:p;)

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    1. Awww :)
      So happy you found it amazing!
      Thank you so much,Sarab! :)

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    2. It took me more than a moment na Sims ;) Lol.

      It's good one, well writ. Do keep your haiku simple though, so Bikram ji and I can understand too :D

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    3. Thank you so much, Dearo! :)
      No worries..I'm always ready to explain ..will go for what you said! :)

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  3. till the time I write my first Haiku.. let me learn as a sincere student from you :)

    Weakest LINK

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    1. Ya sure,Rachit dear :)
      Will let you learn for sure..It would be mine pleasure and honor you asked for! :)

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  4. Hey Sim, the sunshine award is waiting for you at http://www.sudeshnadas.com/2012/03/little-ray-of-sunshine.html

    :)

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