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I Love Downpour!

Written for The Haiku Challenge 2012 - Day 19 – February 19th – Theme: Seasons Type: Kigo



Shimmering raindrops
fills me with loving rejoice 
and delicacy  

Fragrance of wet soil
delights my soul with perky 
sensation within

Season of downpour
sketches a new love story
deep in my heart !

Comments

  1. Welcome back, Simran! :)
    Very nicely written. :)
    Rain is my favourite too! :D

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  2. Rain can be so refreshing for the soul!

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  3. It has the freshness of rain in spring:)

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  4. Wow!!..

    "Fragrance of wet soil
    delights my soul with perky
    sensation within"

    These lines are my fav Simy....Can relate to them
    Penned very beautifully :)

    Seasons ~ Avatars of mother nature

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  5. I can tell that you love rain!

    Winter

    Thank you for using comment moderation instead of word verification. Blogger's word verification system has become unbearable!

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  6. My dear Simran,
    Rain and love...2 very potent ingredients (smile).
    Lovely expressions.
    Thanks for sharing. Thanks also for the visit. Always nice to see you.
    Have a great week ahead, dear!

    A Cheerful Glance

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  7. Great reflections. I live where it rains a lot and I love it. It makes everything new.

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  8. Phew, busy bloggage!! Plays havoc with my old machine!!

    Love the bit about the - fragrance of wet soil!!

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  9. Shimmering raindrops ~ Beautiful..
    Fragrance of wet soil ~ Pleasant..
    Sketches a new love story ~ Lovely..

    Little one, loved your take a lot..

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  10. sweet and true
    and nicely written too
    :)

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  11. hi simran, u seems to be haiku girl all dis days...
    eautiful read :)

    loved the first and the last pics..
    nice lines/thoughts after every pic too :)

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