Sunday, December 04, 2011

Requisite !

Withering blossom
Awaiting for the cool sensational touch of silver dotted threads of heaven 
To make them pure and refreshing once again
Such is your love!
Come and quench the thirst of my heart

Season has been changed by the time of spring,
Replenishment of leaves sprouts and blossoms renewed...
Such is your love!
Come and overwhelm my broken heart

Trees are standing still and calm
Waiting for the breeze to hold them 
And pass by to let them dance and reflexive -repulsive rejoice
Such is your love!
Come and embrace me tightly in your arms
I need you and your love

This huge world seems to be have failures and full of hurdles
But it runs on hope that even enlighten the dark pathway
Such is your love!
Come and re-fill this hopeless lover's black heart to pink loving heart  once again


Oh my love!
I still remember that Conversation we had in silence
Preaching each other’s unsaid words
Those fast heartbeats
Warmth of your touch with caress
Our meeting lips to quench the thirst of united souls
Such is your love!
Come and embrace me tightly in your arms
I need you and your love
 Sharing this post with Poetry Picnic Week 16: My Life In Free Verse

45 comments:

  1. i am amazed at your poetry writing skills...you are so young and you write so beautifully.. :)

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  2. This is so beautiful Simran. I hope your love does come and claim your heart soon.

    http://rimlybezbaruah.blogspot.com/2011/02/our-journey-someone-said-love-happens.html

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  3. Very lovely poem, Simran :) ♥

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  4. I forgot to tell, I loved the falling rose petals and heart widget. :) ♥

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  5. Hopeful and blissful emotions,

    Love is light,
    well done,

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  6. nice blog template & rose petals i lovee it .

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  7. a beautiful way to write a poem.. Loved it so much Little One.. I love the rose petals.. so sweet...

    Someone is Special

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  8. Lovers pining for their hearts to be full again. I enjoyed this. So romantic!

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  9. Hello.
    Such sweet sentiments from one so young. The falling petals are a nice touch too.
    Well done, Simran dear!
    Thanks for sharing & visiting. I always appreciate your comments.

    For ref:
    Our Candlelight Of Love

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  10. A very sweet poem on love and the backdrop of rose petals make this appear caressing the lovers!

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  11. Come and quench the thirst of my heart <3
    Beautiful.

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  12. Oustanding dear....I loved the petal effect too ^_^

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  13. So beautiful!
    Love it <3 <3 <3

    Love
    http://www.meghasarin.blogspot.com

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  14. The Solitary Writer,
    Will try best to make you amaze each time :)
    Thank you so much!

    Keep sending me your feedback :)

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  15. Rimly,
    Hope so ;)
    Thank you ,Rimly :)

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  16. JANU,
    Thank you so much ,JANU :)

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  17. Shreya,
    Awww :)
    Glad you liked it!
    Thanks for appreciating me and my blog :) ♥

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  18. Morning,
    Thank you so much ,Morning!
    Yeah, Love is so bright :)

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  19. Someone is Special,
    Thank you so much Special One :)
    Was waiting eagerly to know your views..Glad you loved it!

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  20. The Write Girl,
    Glad you enjoyed the post ..
    Thank you so much! :)

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  21. Andy,
    Thank you so much Andy dear for your sweet words :)

    I'm honored!

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  22. Rahul Bhatia,
    Glad you liked it!
    Thank you so much.. :)

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  23. ☂☆ Vållῐ ★♬,
    Thanks Valli :)
    My Creative Star!

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  24. Beautifully written ... falling rose petals added to its allure. Thank you for sharing ~~

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  25. extremely beautiful post....

    wud like to share a story a bit similar to words used in ur write up (unsaid words)

    http://csdevendrapagal.blogspot.com/2011/06/blog-post_18.html

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  26. Well that was certianly different!

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  27. love the "silver dotted threads of heaven"! Thank you for sharing. :)

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  28. I wish I could express myself fully and show how terrible this need is for somebody..,I wish someone could hear this silent plea and heed to this...

    I love all the images you choose for your posts. They are so lovely.

    I read this and it reminds me of the Song of Songs in the Bible....

    I love this :)

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  29. beccagivens,
    Thank you so much for appreciating words :)

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  30. CS Devendra K Sharma "Man without Brain" ,
    Thank you so much!
    Glad you liked it

    Will come on yours soon :)

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  31. Whitesnake,
    Happy that you find it unique..
    Thanks :)

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  32. halfwaybetweenthegutter,
    Thank you :)

    Hope to have you again :)

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  33. Melissa,
    Thank you so much, Melissa :)

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  34. melissa,
    My Dear one!
    I'm so much happy you are liking my creations..and they are touching your emotions..

    Thank you so much for appreciating me..

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  35. fantacy in practicality ,
    Wow!
    That's a point :)

    Thanks

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~Simran