Good one Simy...nice poem :)
☂☆ Vållῐ ★♬ ,Thank you ,Valli :)
Adorable poem. I'd have like to kinda short sweet Poem.
Mahi Khokhar,Glad you liked this one :)Thank you ..
wow lines liked it :)sim sim
Geet,Thanks sweet geets:)
Good one sim...Someone is Special
and convey my regards to Grand ma..Someone is Special
i simply loved the imagry....beautiful....n lovely pic..:)
Hello.Lovely expressions & nice imagery.Thanks for sharing.I appreciate your visits & comments too.Undress Me With Your Sultry Eyes
such a deep thought....Loved it..short but sweet one....
Someone Is Special,Sure I'll convey your regards to mu grand ma,Thank you so much :)
Vaisakhi,I'm so happy you liked it!thank you dear :)
Andy dear,Thank you so much :)
Hema di,I'm so happy ...Thank you :)
love the last few lines. wonderful.
love the imagery of this,
Nice expressions.Love it.Best wishes.
To withdraw one self in vast eternity, very touching line.
Lovely poetry...Short and nice.. :)ANSHULhttp://anshul-gautam.blogspot.com/2012/01/butterfly.html
Hello Simran dear.I'm revisiting this one.The ending of this poem is very deep. You have poetic expression way beyond your young words.Awesome imagery!Thanks for sharing.Harp Of My Soul
Wonderfully crafted poem, loved reading it.Namaste
You painted a beautiful picture in my mind, as well as left me wondering. The ending of this poem is brilliant, and it leaves me wanting to know more. Great work!Here's mine for the rally: Ripples and the Anchor
Either positive or negative comments are good because it shows I am still relevant. Hope you enjoyed reading here:-) !!~Simran