Monday, October 24, 2011

Cascade

Poignant eternity
I'm falling 
In lap of ground 
To meet lavish green growth
With soft cool dew 
To withdraw oneself 
Into this vast eternity
Once again.

23 comments:

  1. ☂☆ Vållῐ ★♬ ,
    Thank you ,Valli :)

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  2. Adorable poem. I'd have like to kinda short sweet Poem.

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  3. Mahi Khokhar,
    Glad you liked this one :)
    Thank you ..

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  4. and convey my regards to Grand ma..

    Someone is Special

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  5. i simply loved the imagry....beautiful....n lovely pic..:)

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  6. Hello.
    Lovely expressions & nice imagery.

    Thanks for sharing.
    I appreciate your visits & comments too.

    Undress Me With Your Sultry Eyes

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  7. such a deep thought....Loved it..short but sweet one....

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  8. Someone Is Special,

    Sure I'll convey your regards to mu grand ma,
    Thank you so much :)

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  9. Vaisakhi,
    I'm so happy you liked it!
    thank you dear :)

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  10. Andy dear,
    Thank you so much :)

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  11. Hema di,
    I'm so happy ...
    Thank you :)

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  12. love the last few lines. wonderful.

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  13. Nice expressions.
    Love it.
    Best wishes.

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  14. To withdraw one self in vast eternity, very touching line.

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  15. Lovely poetry...Short and nice.. :)

    ANSHUL
    http://anshul-gautam.blogspot.com/2012/01/butterfly.html

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  16. Hello Simran dear.
    I'm revisiting this one.
    The ending of this poem is very deep. You have poetic expression way beyond your young words.
    Awesome imagery!
    Thanks for sharing.

    Harp Of My Soul

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  17. Wonderfully crafted poem, loved reading it.

    Namaste

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  18. You painted a beautiful picture in my mind, as well as left me wondering. The ending of this poem is brilliant, and it leaves me wanting to know more. Great work!

    Here's mine for the rally: Ripples and the Anchor

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