Monday, August 22, 2011

Time to say Goodbye

This post is written for Carry On Tuesday #132
A hurry get up, 
Time is passing away,
Quick-Quick,
Heart is blazing,
Staring at clock,
Beeping tick-toke,
Walking around the room,
My eyes searching for someone,
The charm of my heart,
Rubbing hands,
Ruminating impatience,
Murmuring lips,
Ah! it's getting too late,
Staring glares on clock,
It was like anybody had stopped ,
That moment that was too hard to pass,
Closing my eyes I found him and smiled;
But still I was waiting for him to hug and embrace him within,
Peace inside heart was breaking down,
Ringing Door Bell!
I ran fast from stairs as much as I can..
Astonishment break my heart ..
He met with an accident just before my door
I saw the core  of my heart lying on floor;
Shedding blood,
Still he tried to take out something he had,
And that was an engagement ring and a letter he bought,
Holding my hand he made my finger wear that last mark of our love,
He told me, 'I'm  leaving my memories with you''
Just a wish to leave my soul within you my love,
I never wished to say you ''Good Bye'',
But I'm helpless ..


And asked me to read that letter before him,
The words he always wanted to say me...
It was written ..
When I'm alone
I dream of the horizon
and words fail;
yes, I know there is no light
in a room where the sun is absent,
if you are not here with me.
At the windows
show everyone my heart
which you set alight;
enclose within me
the light you
encountered on the street.

When you are far away
I dream of the horizon
and words fail,
and, yes, I know
that you are with me;
you, my moon, are here with me,
my sun, you are here with me
with me, with me, with me.

now, yes, I shall experience them.
I'll go with you
on ships across seas
which, I know,
no, no, exist no longer,

You and me
My Evergreen princess you re-germinated my shattered dreams,
You embraced me Care and Love,
You transformed my life from hell to heaven,
I Love You So Much!
His last sentence echoed in my ears was ;
''It's time to say ,Good Bye my love,
I hugged him tightly,
The sight of lovers feedeth those in love 
His blurred breath blurred my colourful world,
His shining ring was the only light and his love letter was only the love to praise left in my empty life! 
Because Love is blind and lovers cannot see!

17 comments:

  1. Oh how heart wrenching. I could feel the love and pain as I read.

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  2. nice...you are improving in your poem...teach me how to write one :)

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  3. the ring was very significant sign of undying love. though a sadistic poem, still it reflects the undying love that keeps the two souls connected for ever and ever.

    very nice presentation. loved it. keep up!

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  4. What a sad poem. To lose someone you love is dying yourself. You expressed your emotions of loss beautifully

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  5. I wish I could write like u do,this is so beautiful,I have tears in my eyes..love u Simran.

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  6. Oh,so poignant and touching!You brought tears to my eyes!
    Sim,this poem has gushed out like a stream,so pure and flowing!
    -POSH

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  7. Look how much you've grown little one. Then perhaps, like Ma Faye, I'll call you my big one ;)...

    I loved how your poetry in the middle as if it was my heart speaking and expressing its feelings. I can relate with it so much...hmmm...

    It's one of your most wonderful posts little one :*

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  8. Wow!!! very touching and it really touched my heart.Keep writing like this.....you have to next level.

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  9. OMG!! Wish I could write as u doing..very touchy n loveliest.

    www.mahikhokhar.blogspot.com

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  10. Very very touching dear.....really sad...:((

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  11. ah... there you are simran!
    this is so lovely
    I was swept away
    <3

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  12. Woah. Sooo sad. :(
    I can feel it. Oh why .. -.-

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  13. I don't ordinarily comment but I gotta say appreciate it for the post on this amazing one ...its realy Beautiful work. enjoy yr style of prose and the places this poem takes me..

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  14. The poem is so touching Simran.. No words to describe your work...

    Someone is Special

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  15. Mind blowing Simran!!!
    Well written <3 :)

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