Wednesday, August 17, 2011

My Soul

Mournful sin,
Covering me out in dilemma,
Melancholic beats echoed in my ears,
Light was enraptured to terminate from my sight,
Satan was coming along with drowsy wind of Alas!
My heartbeats were fast and it was unbearable to listen..
The Satan grasped me,
I was in dark!
Screeching the dark confinement !
Eliminating the bonds,
 I narrowed down soon;
But my soul lashed it hard to be gratuitous.  

14 comments:

  1. OMG! What a poem? How come you came with such a plot.. Amazing little one..

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  2. yay so happy to see you pop up on my google reader again with poem! hope you stay!This is one of the best posts I've read from you in a long time man. What a beautiful crazy creature you are.! adorable post...Nice post. I am impressed. Keep it up.

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  3. It's dark poetry little one...hmmm...but I read your conversations with my other little girl, Portia. It amazes me to read something that you have never experienced.
    Experimental artworks stretches your mind and heart...and that is great :)

    As a whole, your work sinks deep with the imagery you presented...

    Very well done!

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  4. In the dead of the night of a cold winter, did I realize, within me is an eternal summer.

    Perhaps, a pure soul shall never be taken by dark.


    Cheers,
    Blasphemous Aesthete

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  5. your soul lashed it ... or assimilated and purified the Satan...

    Nice one!

    Cheers!
    SUB

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  6. What an insight review, I like your article.

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  7. Simmy I was thinking what to comment...you write so well...
    You are multitalented. A poet also ;)

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  8. lovely lines...beautifully crafted words!

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  9. hats off... I am simply smitten and short of words to praise ur b'ful poem.. great work is all i can say.

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  10. Nicely written! :)
    I'm speechless. Hahah

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  11. Wow...you penned this one beautifully..as u did always...

    your writing always amaze me...how you choose your topic "Only God knows"...

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  12. Now this is the post I can relate to. Nice! :)

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