Sunday, August 21, 2011

हर पल


हर पल मे है मदहोशी,
हर पल एक बात जो  है एक  अन्छुपा राज़,
दिल की बात जुबान पे जो थमी,
किसी के  दिल  की धड़कने बढ़ी ,
इस पल से वाकिफ हैं हम दोनों 
और अनजान इसकी गहराई से,
ये कैसा राज़ है ?
जिससे वाकिफ है सारा जहान,
उस राज मे जो बात है,
वो एक अनछिपा राज़ है l


13 comments:

  1. Arey waah Hindi main poem...nice

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  2. Loved it Simran,simple but it says a lot,showing your innocence.

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  3. mysteriously romantic, loved your poetry, sim, wonderful:))

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  4. I liked some particular lines here little one...इस पल से वाकिफ हैं हम दोनों
    और अनजान इसकी गहराई से (google translated as, We are aware of the moment And unaware of its depth).

    A poetry so concise yet so profound. Admirable little one :)

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  5. romantic hmmm sim sim :) very sweet poem..

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  6. Hello there, trying to fins your Carry on Tuesday link to read you.

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  7. romantic stuff....i m seriously likin this side of urs...beautiful write...:)

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  8. nice one....:):) sweet, simple yet have depth...:):)

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  9. Beautifully expressed and you cannot find a better language than Urdu to express it accurately!!
    As this place has participation from all over it would be helpful if you could put a gist of the poem in English!! Its essence would then be enjoyed by a wider audience!! :)


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  10. Sim, loved it so much.. sweet picture and words..

    Someone is Special

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  11. Beautiful :)
    Reminds me of a song,

    aaj kal tere mere pyaar ke charche har zubaan par, sabko maloom hai aur sabko khabar ho gayi :D


    Cheers,
    Blasphemous Aesthete

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~Simran