Thursday, June 16, 2011

The Dark

Green leaves getting marcscent;
Turning to tenebrous,
Black shed of clouds over moon and stars covering around all around...
A shadow rectifying its darkness,
Mixture of dark in light gleaming texture drab off its shine;
Closure of bulb quite for the light or resigns,
Close eyes can feel the dark; the emptiness inside!!
Eclipse covering the sun turns off its bright light.

31 comments:

  1. A very clever one..and darkness seems to be seen by the right eyes..
    well personified simo dear..
    and i see vocabulary enhancement ;)

    Keep going girl!

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  2. close your eyes till the eclipse is over have patience...........now open your eyes, you can again see the green leaves and bright light.

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  3. Sad sad poem by a happy girl...hope all is well my dear. tc

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  4. read it twice ...really wow rhyming :)

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  5. many kisses to u..♥..
    lyk blog..

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  6. Hey, Hi

    back after a long time..
    :)

    i liked the thought that you put behind these verse..
    beautiful gal..
    :)


    Regards,
    Eon Heath...

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  7. So much for a lunar eclipse. :D

    Dark, appealing :)

    Cheers,
    Blasphemous Aesthete

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  8. Beautiful..When I try to relate what you write with your age,it doesn't happen..its always a pleasure to be here...

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  9. Hi little one...I'm allowing myself to stay in the dark, only for a while... The One who has led me there, will take me out of there... It could be painful...Geez, it is painful. It's scary, yes... I have come to terms with my need to be always with somebody.... for constant craving for attention. God has taken that spotlight on me and allowed me to look at myself... to know whose hands will be there to guide me back to light... Darkness is "holy"... Thanks for your poem... love you little one :)

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  10. A beautiful, hear-felt rendition of the eclipse, my dear

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  11. liked ur dark expression written in enlighted way. :)

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  12. lovely thought....i spcly loved the usage of words...1st 4 lines were like super awesome...loved it thoroughly....:)

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  13. beautiful and so intense :)

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  15. @Irfan:
    Thank you :)

    @Snehu:
    Glad to see your comment :)..
    Thank you :)

    @Sanchi:
    But I want to feel the dark,the emptiness..how it feels!:)
    Thanks

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  16. @Sulekkha:
    Yep :)..As sadness transform to happiness the same dark transform to light:)..Thank you..

    @GeetS:
    Really WoW comment too;)
    Thank you..

    @Shona:
    How sweet! Thanks..

    @Eon Heath:
    Welcome back:)..
    Glad that you liked my thoughts ..thank you so much :)

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  17. @Hemant Kumar
    Thank you :)

    @Blasphemous Aesthete:
    Ya..thinking of that I wrote this!:)
    Thank you so much ..

    @Alpana:
    That's an honor me to listen this from you..Nice to hear from you
    thank you so much :D

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  18. @Dear one:
    That's true!
    Darkness helps us to find out who's there to protect us:)..It's scary,it's dark but still wants to feel it for a while.
    Thank you so much :)..love ya too

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  19. @Rimly:
    Thank you so much,Rimly :)..
    Thanks for stopping by..

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  20. @some unspoken words:
    Transforming :)...Glad you liked my enlighten thoughts..
    Thank you.

    @Vaisakhi:
    My best 4 lines;)..
    Thank you so much!

    @Rachit
    Thank you :)..

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  21. @Website hosting India:
    Welcome To my blog :)
    Thank you so much for such beautiful compliments :)..would love hear more from you..

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  22. Heartfelt Post Simran..

    Someone is Special

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  23. Someone Is Special,
    Thank you so much! :)

    The Cello Strings,
    Thank you..Glad you liked it :)

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  24. A beautifully vivid write. Nicely done!
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  25. beautiful and the song tok it to another level!
    enjoy the rally!!!

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  26. Marbles in my pocket,
    Welcome to my blog!
    Thank you so much :)

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  27. lynnaima,
    Welcome to my blog!
    Thank you so much!
    You over filled me with a joy!

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~Simran