Saturday, May 21, 2011

BLUFF


My love was true,
That was only for you.,
I cult you with a trust !
That was a belief within my heart..
I kept waiting for you in a wish to say -
          '' I LOVE YOU''
My close eyes were showing me dreams that enraptured me through,
Your murmur lingered my soul,
I was missing your attention that followed me on each path ,
My all thoughts were turning to you..
Your devious deeds were cryptic to me,
Your ruthless behavior was ruminating me,
I was unaware of your sudden deviation,
Rising of questions in my mind was deteriorating me at every second ,
That dusky evening answered to all my questions that was sucking me within..
Those tears were full of pain that each time regained ,
When I saw your hand in someone else hand..
My dreams drained all over again!
Your unexpected bluff made my life hopeless and tough,
My life became full of restlessness and grieve ..
That was sucking me within so deep!


14 comments:

  1. So true feelings, you write the best Sims!

    I am really emotional reading this!

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  2. it really makes me wonder where you draw your emotions from certain situations if you haven't experience such yet...

    but i do feel it and it's so pure and sincere little one...

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  3. It hurts when we love and the other one just tosses it like any thing worth trash.

    Nice read.

    :)
    Blasphemous Aesthete

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  4. Wow..a great poem on the feelings of someone!! <3

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  5. I always enjoy your writings. This one is so emotional!

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  6. nice one..another emotional poem from you.....thoroughly enjoyed it....all the best sweetie...keep writing...

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  7. very emotional, wonderful choice of words simran...Keep writing :)

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  8. So emotional, so sad..:(
    Keep writing Simran :)

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  9. @Mohu,
    Thank you :)

    @Melissa
    I haven't experienced such emotions in my life but I can feel the feelings of others ..
    Thank you so much , dear one

    @Anshul
    So true!
    Thank you :)

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  10. @Madhumati..
    Welcome to my blog..
    Thank you :)

    @Mari,
    Thanks for appreciating my skills :)

    @Hemu di
    Thank you so much ..
    Love you :)

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  11. @Arti
    Thank you so much dear ..
    Keep Visiting :)

    @Valli
    Thank you :)

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  12. It is quite painful to love and not have that love returned. However, it is quite common and part of life's experience. It's very important not to place the blame on that person with which we've placed our emotion. We should always love freely and without condition. One day, another will come to us and do the same. Blessings.

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  13. Hello.
    I have to second everything Kay said.
    Always remember, it'd not love that fails us, but we who disappoint love.
    Nicely done, Simran dear!
    Thanks for sharing.

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