Monday, March 07, 2011

An Unwanted Black Heart For You..!


An Unwanted Black Heart For You..!
You made my life living hell..
That made me insecure and unwell,
You made me cry..
You made me hurt,
You made me despotic,
But still I Love you with all my heart,
But my heart is indignant to you,
Because of you;
It losted it's spark ,
Because of you;
It burned in flames without claims,
It was dreamy, But now it's dreary,
It was lovable ; but
Now it's hatred.
It was red , But now it's BLACK..!!!
Because of you...!
An Unwanted Black Heart for You..!
SIMRAN

44 comments:

  1. Hey simo
    Girl you Should be more forgiving in life if you have such a perception at this age it would not be good for you.
    Love is all about love there can be no hatred,it is all about giving and no taking away...your heart in love can never loose it's shine and sparkle. :)
    Hope to have a positive simo next time..will you be?

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  2. Don't get disheartened because you deserve to be happy and don't believe me but trust me, you have written a beautiful piece.So cheers!!

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  3. can i use this please to send to someone who has the BLACKEST of the hearts a person can ever have...

    THANK YOU EXCTLY MY FEELINGS

    but god is great we will soon have ours to be red while THERES turn to CHARCOAL and then TO DUSTtttttttttt and AMEN to that .. and life will be worst then HELL for them ..

    Bikram's

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  4. how can you present a black heart for one whom you loved once?

    love or hatred? where does it sway?
    Isn't it true? that only one can stay?...

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  5. once again very well done...
    just hope its a fiction only on your part...

    best wishes,
    irfan

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  6. Very good poem. I hope its only a poem with fiction

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  7. yes, forgiveness is a good thing. so...give that black heart away and forget about it so your red heart can replenish itself into a new and stronger one that has only love to give.

    loved your piece!
    it was moving and well thought out. you have a great gift and you express your emotions very well.

    keep up the good writing.

    love you you my friend!

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  8. really a great poem...
    it can't be a fiction i think,
    coz for writing something like this u need to feel it for sure...
    anyways forgiveness is something divine... as any love story moves just because lovers forgives each other but they don't forget...
    so just forgive but don't forget.

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  9. @Snehu
    Welcome back To my blog after a long time...happy to see you back :)
    I will be positive and forgiving next time :)
    Oh yes!, my heart is just like a Diamond, it will never loose it's spark ! :)

    Thank you so much for such a sweet and positive view :)
    Take care ..

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  10. @ Pratibha The Talent
    Thank You :)

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  11. @ Bikramjit
    Ya sure !
    Thank You :)

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  12. @adithyasaravana
    Welcome to my blog
    This hard but not impossible !!
    Thank You ..

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  13. @Asma
    Welcome to my blog
    Thank You :)

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  14. @Hope
    I appreciate your views :)
    Thank you so much for your wishes and love :)
    Lot's of love and wishes to you too dear ...Take care :)

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  15. wooo wat a transition...from sweet poems to a resentful work...nice piece..but y so down wid someone..:)....well i want tat red hert back...:)....keep writin......

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  16. @ Vaisakhi
    Hoping the same ...
    Thank You :)

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  17. @Rolling Stone
    I'll never forget :)

    Thank You :)

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  18. omg simran that's a wonderful poem...guess this is the first tym you've written something like this...

    Be positive and keep writing :)

    Take Care.

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  19. @Fatima
    Yes, this is the first time I wrote something like this ..Ya sure next time with more mystery and positivity :)

    Thank You..
    Take care :)

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  20. Nicely written... the feelings came out well, its the first time I have read such a poem here, usually its cheerful!!
    Have a great day:)

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  21. @Arti
    Yes, This is first time ,I wrote something like this ..I'll be back with that cheer soon :)
    Hoping so..

    Thank You :)

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  22. nice post but after reading it, i felt so much ..keep smiling Dear:)

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  23. @Geeta
    Welcome to my Blog :)
    I can understand that..
    You too keep Smiling :)

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  24. beautiful song ..i love this song "when you say nothing at all" :)

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  25. @Ayush Gupta
    Welcome to my Blog
    Thank You :)

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  26. Sad darling! What is this! I know your heart is golden. Sweet Poem! I just loved and faved it on BJ.

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  27. @Mohinee
    Thank You so much dear :D

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  28. Sometimes we just have to say what we feel whether it is pretty or not...nice work

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  29. This is ... a wonderful, but very sad poem. Strong in her words, strong in the imagery. Wow!

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  30. Strong feelings....
    Cheerup n cheers!!!
    Just pay attention to ur feelings more before u pen them down...

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  31. ... sigh

    I felt that extremely deep! My last two post were pretty dark... yet this last one was about a love turned dark too.

    you expressed you feelings so well and with such talent! Your words touched me.

    ~L

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  32. You can feel and say what you feel like...loved this.

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  33. i could feel what you wrote...loved it...:)

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  34. My sweet Simran,
    I feel the pain of your black heart. Forgive the one who wronged you so your heart will reopen to love again.
    Wonderful writing!
    Thanks for sharing.

    No Anguish Or Pain

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  35. A powerful expression! The spark will return, when your heart mends.

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  36. I think you have done a good job of expressing both sides of the issue, allowing the dark side to dominate in this particular moment, an important part of the reality of some relationships that are supposed to be about love.

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~Simran